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尚未纸质过的旧情(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2011-04-12 00:27:23    Post subject: 尚未纸质过的旧情(组诗) Reply with quote

尚未纸质过的旧情(组诗)
文/ 山城子

◆ 初恋

静静地
等在路边。突然亮起
眸子。视线四处伸展
姣俏,裹着一身碧绿
款款而来

仙歌飘落
鸿鹄祝福
上苍牵线。并步
踏叶听韵,履岸观水
一步步
走成临界香甜

晚风婀娜掠过
心旌摇曳
语意绵缠
一枚紫叶翩翩扑落
嫩指轻衔于唇
象吻前世之缘

红日不忍落去
将一缕红纱的透明
轻轻相赠

◆ 高处的甜蜜

不是一起徜徉
我不会攀得那样高
高处的桑枝
结满大粒大粒的甜蜜

我使劲摇落
你用绽开的笑靥来接
一粒、一粒,又一粒
染紫你鲜亮的唇

我欣慰树桠之上
你惬意树影里
两只喜鹊喳喳叫着
欲落又飞开


◆ 为什么偏要喊你姐姐

家乡小河
婆娑依稀树影
一盏剪纸画亮起来
红红小灯。河蟹
沙沙而来
你悄悄下令…

其实,你没我大
为什么偏要喊你姐姐
说求求了,求求了

后来你家迁得很远
我丢失了捉蟹心情。只

依树而坐。陪着晚风
听那湍急的河水
静静地流淌我的心

◆ 那时的花季

那时的花季太斯文
词典里没有浪漫
纯洁,古玉一样宝贵
情已相互穿透
没碰,真的没碰一下指尖

也是世上的歧路太多
未用意已经天各一方
再见时对视霜鬓
叹无法回到从前

◆ 两棵树

水边
两棵树邂逅
碧叶亮起脉脉的心情
风来了
悄悄说话
雨来了
纤尘洗净

相望而不相近
共聆小河潺潺之声
也一起看云
赏月
觅虹……
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PostPosted: 2011-04-13 06:22:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

唉,幸福着,甜美着,回忆着,幸福着……问好老师!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-13 18:42:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

往事历历,纯情蜜意。非常欣赏。问候李老师。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 03:10:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

为什么偏要喊你姐姐

據說女人對調皮的小男孩總有種特別的感覺。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 21:37:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

涅阳三水 wrote:
唉,幸福着,甜美着,回忆着,幸福着……问好老师!


谢谢三水留帖!!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 21:39:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
往事历历,纯情蜜意。非常欣赏。问候李老师。


谢谢少君的鼓励!!!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 21:41:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢戴玨!!

——现在是调皮的老头子了!!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 22:20:52    Post subject: Reply with quote


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PostPosted: 2011-04-17 00:26:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢枫桥的鼓励!!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-17 02:44:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

浪漫, 真情
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PostPosted: 2011-04-17 11:08:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

尚未纸质过的旧情

這個轉品其實帶點後現代的意味.

可以說心情尚未落款,
舊情依舊在網上,
想要落在紙上(那就定形定性了)
但永遠是"尚未",
虧欠心理,
或者一直想給個交代

語意是滑的, 各式寫法似乎都可以.


後現代不好呵. Laughing
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PostPosted: 2011-04-19 20:58:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
浪漫, 真情


谢谢白水!!
——写出来才有些浪漫,情,是很性情的!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-19 21:03:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
尚未纸质过的旧情

這個轉品其實帶點後現代的意味.
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山城子很想后现代一回
但每每一抬脚就走到黄河的岸边
距欧美太远

心情停留于“尚未”
人才不会老去
虽然已经接近“古稀”
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PostPosted: 2011-04-19 22:32:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

意境不错
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PostPosted: 2011-04-20 23:16:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢令通!!
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谢谢令通!!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-29 02:06:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

清新,美好。
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PostPosted: 2011-05-03 07:22:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢晴宝儿来阅!!
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