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情感三章

杨洛
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Joined: 09 Apr 2011
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Posted: 2011-04-09 22:16:54 Post subject: 情感三章

挥舞春秋大袖直面冬的萧瑟　　不愿激情在生命中荒芜　　柔然拭去你忧郁的泪水　　以一朵永开不败的雪莲之雪　　　　在梦幻的田园中骑射　　敢嘲笑太阳的老于世故　　把溪水的叮咚带回家园　　从衣兜中取出月影的皎洁　　　　驾一叶扁舟启航　　冲动翻浪的激越与险石的峥嵘　　不屑曙光平淡的讽刺诗　　勇敢留住青苔的绿 _________________ 雁门关：aluo.hongxiu.cn 洛吧：luo8.hongxiu.cn

白水
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Posted: 2011-04-11 15:25:42 Post subject:

问好诗人嘲笑太阳的老于世故　　把溪水的叮咚带回家园喜欢这样的句子，大气，明了不屑曙光平淡的讽刺诗曙光平淡怎样理解？

杨洛
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Joined: 09 Apr 2011
Posts: 13
Location: 中国山西应县七中
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Posted: 2011-04-12 00:22:53 Post subject:

呵呵，诗情发酵，随意识而流。之所以“曙光平淡”，是因为我被批评为直白而怕了。 _________________ 雁门关：aluo.hongxiu.cn 洛吧：luo8.hongxiu.cn

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