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五律 · 云
胡恢宗
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PostPosted: 2011-03-29 17:02:25    Post subject: 五律 · 云 Reply with quote
五律 · 云
坐看鱼鳞起，悠悠兴未央。
白羊游翰海，玉马戏重阳。
有意为松乳，无心伴雁翔。
青雯腾细浪，雨顺醉山乡。
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水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2011-03-29 17:22:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
写云之多变，博喻其形，蔚为大观。欣赏！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰
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PostPosted: 2011-03-30 01:02:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢黄洋界老师鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-30 08:05:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
生动咏云诗。
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影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2011-04-02 02:53:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
清新写意

学习佳作
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诗无涯。思在线
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PostPosted: 2011-04-02 18:20:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢庆宏师、寒水兄鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-06 04:09:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
有唐诗的韵味！虽然没有研究社会。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-08 01:02:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢诗弦先生评点。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-08 23:32:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏佳作，问好恢宗诗友。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-14 03:39:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢家珍诗友鼓励，并向您问好。
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