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《苏州丝•旧海棠》（外一首）

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2011-03-22 22:28:25 Post subject: 《苏州丝•旧海棠》（外一首）

《苏州丝•旧海棠》文／晴宝儿伊呀，一尾鱼后面一枝苏州丝上的露穿过美人坞，伊发现鱼我发现白影伊的眼睛里水汪汪苏州呀，就这么摇着太湖的桨涟漪蒙眬眉眼蒙眬身世蒙眬地挤走了哎呀呀，谁呀正在画的天净沙，满江红小画布初绽的桃尖、经卷和漫山满野的北方春色 2011-3-21 《哦，麦朵》我来了，轻轻地遇见一场雨水去什么的路上，我匆匆经过的小镇、沙漠或玻璃窗子旧天气，水雾的嘈杂就飘忽了，大乱而大静这些司空见惯行色的人，怎么就慢了下来用耳朵听，一途雨水个体，执意，滴滴答答敲打着空心人，空杯子上一次，取出杯子在台北蔡明亮飘浮咖啡的沙地一个人，打开着咖啡就是“咖啡”的代词，没有什么可以取代什么山，什么铁都不是 2011-3-21 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2011-03-24 18:50:01 Post subject:

咖啡就是“咖啡”的代词，没有什么可以取代爽气。问好宝儿

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Posted: 2011-03-27 16:45:23 Post subject:

拜读学习，问安。 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

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Posted: 2011-04-09 01:30:16 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

咖啡就是“咖啡”的代词，没有什么可以取代

爽气。问好宝儿 Very Happy

白水也是无可取代,哈
感谢阅评，问候白水。
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Posted: 2011-04-09 01:31:15 Post subject:

唐慧 wrote:

拜读学习，问安。

客气了，问好唐慧，感谢阅批。
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Posted: 2011-04-10 00:39:46 Post subject:

殊不料，楼主对江南的文化传承把握的如此之细腻。

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Posted: 2011-04-10 14:29:58 Post subject:

欣赏，问好。

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