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沁園春 辛卯新春感賦二章
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PostPosted: 2011-03-20 16:36:34    Post subject: 沁園春 辛卯新春感賦二章 Reply with quote

沁園春 辛卯新春感賦二章

之一、
時序當春,白頭遷客,攜卷歸來。
但喧歌不夜,觥籌錦幄;繁燈如綴,車馬銅街。
蜃市千圍,蓬瀛三淺,幾見月明滄海涯。
逡巡久、豈春歸辜負,竹杖芒鞋。

晞微虛室心齋。驀回首、砉然渾屯開。
恰紅梅破萼,風華綽約;青山入夢,氣象崔嵬。
繫櫂離亭,聽濤孤館,何處子陵煙雨臺?
乘桴去、且隨機雲水,磊落襟懷。

之二、
相對無言,某水某山,吾亦無猜。
况淋漓筆墨,昂藏丘壑;逍遙意趣,踔絶氛埃。
變化盈虛,平章黑白,一念渾涵周九垓。
憑誰說、悟菩提非樹,明鏡非臺。

忘機脫略形骸。倚泉石、解衣磅礡哉。
更環圍鬱鬱,晨嵐夕照;仰瞻止止,翠柏青槐。
聽雨難期,餞花有約,也道先生歸去來。
春如舊,正綠楊池外,隱隱輕雷。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-20 18:17:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

老师好文笔,拜读
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PostPosted: 2011-03-21 06:10:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

随机云水,磊落襟怀。欣赏先生大作。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-21 08:10:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

菩提非樹,明鏡非臺。
心中無物,何染尘埃?

聽雲老師好詞好悟。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-21 10:04:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

晞微虛室心齋。驀回首、砉然渾屯開。
恰紅梅破萼,風華綽約;青山入夢,氣象崔嵬。
繫櫂離亭,聽濤孤館,何處子陵煙雨臺?
乘桴去、且隨機雲水,磊落襟懷。


襟情之咏!好。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-21 16:47:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

問候諸位詞長了!多謝嘉勉鼓勵!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-21 23:30:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

隨機雲水,磊落襟懷。
馆主好文笔、好襟怀。问好馆主。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-28 15:58:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝詞長嘉勉賜評!致問候!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-30 17:10:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

其一,下阕字字珠玑,流韵如瀑;其二,起手蕴奇趣于平白,引人入胜。馆主文采飞扬,叹服!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-02 02:32:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝正夫詞長賜評!
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