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白雪•雪

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-02-11 23:12:18 Post subject: 白雪•雪

寒风送絮，图雅意，轻盈曼舞苍松。年末岁新，诗魂絮语，狂书怎怕芳穷。对窗歌，待梅艳，尽放春容。笛音伴，梦中词慢，笑看旧游踪。思句总忆踏丘，逍遥若画，醉瑶琼。又了几经蹉跎，忧烦弃于空。休追论，目观飞素，弄律绘长空。换腔吟作，清新饰玉枫红。（“白雪”这个词牌，据《钦定词谱》载，“为南宋杨无咎首创，仅存一首。”偶学填了一首）这几天又有点忙，下周三再见哈

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-02-12 02:39:42 Post subject:

寒风送絮，图雅意，轻盈曼舞苍松。…这不就是莹雪吗？ _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-02-12 12:00:45 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

寒风送絮，图雅意，轻盈曼舞苍松。…这不就是莹雪吗？

的确莹雪自画像，飘飘洒洒，轻歌曼舞。。。

白水
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Posted: 2011-02-12 20:40:25 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

胡恢宗 wrote:

寒风送絮，图雅意，轻盈曼舞苍松。…这不就是莹雪吗？

的确莹雪自画像，飘飘洒洒，轻歌曼舞。。。

严重同意

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-02-13 16:12:45 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

寒风送絮，图雅意，轻盈曼舞苍松。…这不就是莹雪吗？

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-02-13 16:16:39 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

胡恢宗 wrote:

寒风送絮，图雅意，轻盈曼舞苍松。…这不就是莹雪吗？

的确莹雪自画像，飘飘洒洒，轻歌曼舞。。。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-02-13 16:22:57 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

胡恢宗 wrote:

寒风送絮，图雅意，轻盈曼舞苍松。…这不就是莹雪吗？

的确莹雪自画像，飘飘洒洒，轻歌曼舞。。。

严重同意

此观点得考虑考虑

谢谢大家关注和点评

抽空回来回复，周三再见 byebye

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-02-14 02:23:58 Post subject:

问好！想续和，只是思缕枯竭，奈何奈何。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-14 07:24:45 Post subject:

“对窗歌，待梅艳，尽放春容”，洒脱，自信，欣喜！好一首自况之作！问好莹雪！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-02-14 07:25:37 Post subject:

目覌飞素，弄律绘长空 - 好词！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-02-15 04:46:19 Post subject:

看来我对词意解不全面。只看到飘洒的一面，还有：诗魂絮语，弄律绘长空的雅兴呢！ _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-02-15 21:27:54 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问好！想续和，只是思缕枯竭，奈何奈何。

问好笑卿兄！

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-02-15 21:29:54 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“对窗歌，待梅艳，尽放春容”，洒脱，自信，欣喜！
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问您好！谢谢点评。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-02-15 21:34:22 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

目覌飞素，弄律绘长空 - 好词！

谢谢关注！问您好！

白水
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Posted: 2011-03-08 16:46:45 Post subject:

节日愉快

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Posted: 2011-03-08 22:38:53 Post subject:

休追论，目观飞素，弄律绘长空。换腔吟作，清新饰玉枫红。乐观的人生

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-14 21:24:49 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

节日愉快

谢谢！也祝JJ时时开心！

前几天不知怎么，偶又进不来啦？今天才看见JJ祝福 Embarassed

JJ和朋友们见谅哦！ Razz

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-14 21:30:40 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

休追论，目观飞素，弄律绘长空。
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谢谢关注！问候您

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