博弈
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zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-12-21
tièzǐ: 4381
láizì: SFO
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 fābiǎoyú: 2010-12-09 11:50:04 fābiǎozhùtí: Soul for Sole |
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Soul for Sole
時間來到河水邊
水說你走開
時間來到葉上
葉說你走開
時間來到夜裡
夜說你走開
露來到夢境裡
夢說請你停留
時間在空間中流浪長路漫漫
時間在血管中循環上下探索
是誰切開了一個口
空間滴出露水，滴、滴、
時間乾渴地跑到終點
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William Zhou周道模
探花
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-06-10
tièzǐ: 3950
láizì: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模běiměifēngwénjí |
| fābiǎoyú: 2010-12-30 18:33:01 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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诗人都有自己的时空感。
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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戴玨
秀才
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-03
tièzǐ: 808
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| fābiǎoyú: 2011-01-01 19:00:04 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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時間乾渴地跑到永遠 
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I labour by singing light
我的blog
我的專欄 |
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白水
大学士
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-10-02
tièzǐ: 14102
láizì: TORONTO
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| fābiǎoyú: 2011-01-02 09:36:09 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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| happy new year |
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博弈
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zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-12-21
tièzǐ: 4381
láizì: SFO
博弈běiměifēngwénjí |
| fābiǎoyú: 2011-01-10 20:48:48 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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新年快樂。 抱歉回得晚了。
再快樂一次吧。
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博弈
榜眼
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-12-21
tièzǐ: 4381
láizì: SFO
博弈běiměifēngwénjí |
| fābiǎoyú: 2011-01-11 07:43:49 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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另寫
Time came to the river bank
Water said: go away
Time came to the leaf edge
The leaf said: go away
Time came to the night
The knight said: go away
Dew that to a dream
The dream sighed woul-d-you-stay
Time, wandering in space, got a long way to go
circulating up and down, in the vessels to explore
Who’s there a cut of the space made
Dewdrops, dripping, dripping…
Till the end, thirsty, the time lands！
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Rhapsodia
童生
zhùcèshíjiān: 2011-01-07
tièzǐ: 26
láizì: BC
Rhapsodiaběiměifēngwénjí |
| fābiǎoyú: 2011-01-11 23:50:08 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Nice, both Chinese and English versions! I love it, especially the last stanza.
I personally would like to end the piece this way:
Dewdrops start dripping, until...
The time, thirsty, and lands!
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博弈
榜眼
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-12-21
tièzǐ: 4381
láizì: SFO
博弈běiměifēngwénjí |
| fābiǎoyú: 2011-01-12 14:30:18 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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thanks for sharing your thoughts, Rhapsodia.
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Rhapsodia
童生
zhùcèshíjiān: 2011-01-07
tièzǐ: 26
láizì: BC
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| fābiǎoyú: 2011-01-12 21:41:34 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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Oops, there is a mistake in the two lines. They should read:
Dewdrops start dripping, until...
The time, thirsty, lands! |
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