【英诗汉译】一只鸽子——（法）杨允达

[William Zhou周道模]

A pigeon

by maurus Young

Seen from above
a pigeon
lifts its head
looks down

watches people
walking with their heads bent

listens to cars
quickly roaring past

plays with the dust flying in the air
Looking down

it smells the polluted air
from above

Looking down
raising its head
A pigeon
seen from above

Oct.30,2005
Paris

一只鸽子

（法）杨允达 著
（中）周道模 译

从上方看见
一只鸽子
伸着头
俯瞰下界

看见人群
正埋头行走

听见汽车
呼啸而过

和空气中的飞尘一起玩耍
俯瞰下界

呼吸着被污染的空气
从上方

俯瞰下界
伸着头
一只鸽子
从上方看见

2005-10-30，巴黎
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[Lake]

喜欢这首诗。

译文第一句“从上方看去 ”，似还可斟酌？

Happy holidays!
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[William Zhou周道模]

谢谢Lake 的好意见，其它地方有小改。
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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