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思慕的人
戀海
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 01:59:56    Post subject: 思慕的人 Reply with quote

城市都已經彎下腰圍了
然而思慕的人
卻窩藏在織夢的閣樓

有聲划櫓而來
時間回到舊情綿綿的五十年代
戀人們的心,總是輕聲唱著繁衍的音符
我多麼嚮往於你
低沉的,在自己譜寫的旋律
交織情感

塞在背後的行李
是山頂黑狗兄一路奔馳的琴弦
曾聽你說,一生嚮往擁有快樂的牧場
那裡歌聲輕盈春燕
你是牧場主人
持續譜出美麗的台語

如今我卻只能用美麗的淡水暮色
悼念。如果你打這裡經過
經過時莫忘了吹起
呼雷伊迪
呼雷伊迪

註壹:此詩乃悼念寶島歌王洪一峰之過逝而作。
註貳:詩中的思慕的人、舊情綿綿、山頂黑狗兄、淡水暮色皆其創作的臺語歌曲。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-02 21:12:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

真情可鉴
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戀海
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PostPosted: 2010-12-14 14:42:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

問好白水
謝謝回應

此詩
雖然是之前的作品
現在讀來
仍有所不滿意
所以修改之後
藉回應版主
再次提上來
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上城
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PostPosted: 2010-12-16 03:01:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

你是牧場主人
持續譜出美麗的台語


问好恋海先生。
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PostPosted: 2010-12-16 07:01:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

問好上城
謝謝回應

重看此詩
腦海又蕩起了旋律

我心內思募的人
你怎麼離開我身邊
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PostPosted: 2010-12-16 22:20:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

戀海 wrote:
問好白水
...


学习这种精益求精
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 21:05:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

拿一杯酒,一边尝一边读
怀念之心,其实沉重


cup of wine
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戀海
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PostPosted: 2010-12-20 13:59:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
拿一杯酒,一边尝一边读
怀念之心,其实沉重


cup of wine


問好金金

謝謝賞讀



總是沉重的心情
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PostPosted: 2010-12-20 18:07:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

怀念和离别同样凄美!!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-22 14:07:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

溪语 wrote:
怀念和离别同样凄美!!


問好溪語
謝謝回應

因著懷念
所以人的存在
有著不朽
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