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[原创]约会等
小尚
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PostPosted: 2007-04-03 05:45:10    Post subject: [原创]约会等 Reply with quote

*约会

一路上,与潮水般的人群
相遇,回家的时间
我出门,象逆水而上的冲浪
缓慢,脚向前行,力量后退
茫茫人海中寻亲,大海里捞针

走过你的门口,又走过你的窗口
虚掩或敞开,空无一人
四周没有你的声音
我知道,你嗓子累
我只看看你的影子,看看你
在人海中的孤独

*一个春日的下午

一个春日的下午
偶然想起,你此时的心迹
跑到窗前,看窗外的飞絮
白色如雪片,轻盈如舞女
我突然想起,曾经跟你说过的
三月的桃花雪,只是更象
梦飞的花季,你坐在花季的中心
一群蝴蝶和小鸟,飞来飞去
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PostPosted: 2007-04-03 17:10:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

我只看看你的影子,看看你
在人海中的孤独

这句感动
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小尚
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PostPosted: 2007-04-14 06:23:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢和平岛版主点评。
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