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空面孔

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Posted: 2010-12-01 02:33:40 Post subject: 空面孔

空面孔文/殷晓媛当他对她媚然一笑，他看到她的面孔纯净无垢，一无喜怒。这是一片乌鹊找不到落点的雪地，透明而辽远，苍凉而澄澈。他期冀过很多，比如北风的痕迹、偶然的鹿的影踪、青烟或者不怕冷的鸟类的歌声，但他走入了没有镜像、漫反射的水晶世界，一切干扰波都被大自然收回。凝滞而无垠的纪元，无声无色，是巨大的茫茫的光融化了她的脸。他为自己笑容的唐突、狭隘羞愤不已。转身之后，雪的山野村庄便从她的面孔上走开，像白色画布上的幻影，一种白脱离另一种白，白的玫瑰花瓣落入白的丝绸。此时，形体只是神的依托，对色彩并不钝感的他，站在质的高墙背后不知道从何处拾回自己的目光。

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Posted: 2010-12-01 16:13:32 Post subject:

娓娓道来！

子在川上曰
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Posted: 2010-12-01 17:28:58 Post subject:

愤不已。转身之后，雪的山野村庄便从她的面孔上走开，像白色画布上的幻影，一种白脱离另一种白，白的玫瑰花瓣落入白的丝绸。此时，形体只是神的依托，对色彩并不钝感的他，站在质的高墙背后不知道从何处拾回自己的目光。 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

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Posted: 2010-12-01 19:25:22 Post subject:

晓媛的诗歌很底蕴，这首更为典雅，耐品精

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Posted: 2010-12-01 20:49:42 Post subject:

很棒，很棒，但我看到明显还是有种阻隔，我相信，最贴近心灵的书写还是文字的正反力量对等的，是种让人一读很美好的对话。质，很好，题目也很好。不容易写。祝好 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-12-02 16:41:22 Post subject:

欣赏问好 _________________ 雷德明武汉理工大学自动化学院 http://blog.sina.com.cn/deminglei11

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Posted: 2010-12-02 22:43:46 Post subject:

文字可以写得很复杂，好象西方抽象艺术，到最后是什么就看读者如何去解读这首很好，通透些 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-12-03 23:46:54 Post subject:

问好楼上诸位，谢谢垂读。多提意见，殷某受教了。呵呵

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Posted: 2010-12-04 00:25:58 Post subject:

yinxiaoyuan wrote:

...此时，形体只是神的依托，
对色彩并不钝感的他，站在质的高墙背后
不知道从何处拾回自己的目光。

這神是指精神吧？只不知這質是指什麽？稟性、本質？形體？質地？質樸？
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Posted: 2010-12-04 00:30:05 Post subject:

质指的是个人品格、内蕴的构成元素

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Posted: 2010-12-04 19:04:13 Post subject:

赞一个！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2010-12-04 21:15:27 Post subject:

问候韩少君老师

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Posted: 2010-12-05 08:51:29 Post subject:

_________________ 在月光下披靡。博客地址： http://blog.sina.com.cn/xiandaishige

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Posted: 2010-12-06 04:49:52 Post subject:

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Posted: 2010-12-09 00:00:15 Post subject:

来读，学习。问好！

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Posted: 2010-12-16 00:17:33 Post subject:

握手，欢迎多批评

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