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《繁星》（组诗）

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Posted: 2010-11-27 08:59:35 Post subject: 《繁星》（组诗）

《繁星》（组诗）文／晴宝儿《田野》火车颠簸着，白桦树赶来又消失我童年的作文，一笔一划地写着田野，树木和牛羊车窗有点模糊，我读着自己的作文很多面孔模糊这些年，偶尔气愤但不再因了别人的无忌无心火车总在，移动的窗景通往老家的路幽静平坦，大片田野这么多年从来在还将在车窗，镜像，体验的步履飞驰着奔赴着…… 2010-11-8 《老家的黄土坡》黄土坡没有咯人的棱角水一样起伏，走在黄土坡太阳渐渐升高围裹身体的黑和雾就淡的快消失踪影了　可是童年到了青年黄土坡横亘在岁月的分水岭我想翻回它，和缩小的我碰碰头叙叙旧，拉拉钩…… 2010-11-9 《农村夜的星》天幕缀满宝石，我从没见过那么多星星，都闪亮活跃盈满生的气息以前没有，至今也没有我一度怀疑头顶有两个天城市被分割的支离破碎的上空，仲秋月夹在层楼缝隙，磕磕绊绊寻觅，冲撞又挣扎偶尔望星空，有时忘了抬头有时看到灯火，渔火，幽明的火光许多年　寥廓的银河　缓缓流动…… 2010-11-9 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2010-11-27 13:23:53 Post subject:

黄土坡横亘在岁月的分水岭我想翻回它，和缩小的我碰碰头叙叙旧，拉拉钩…… 很美好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-11-27 15:03:43 Post subject:

晴宝的诗很有生活质感！多交流！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2010-11-28 15:24:03 Post subject:

宝儿的诗歌视野很宽，喜欢。

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Posted: 2010-11-29 21:11:27 Post subject:

古朴，古味，古香。学习。

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Posted: 2010-11-30 06:46:42 Post subject:

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黄土坡横亘在岁月的分水岭
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岛上的酒樽都装诗满好呢
远方的岛晚安
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Posted: 2010-11-30 06:48:54 Post subject:

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杨海军 wrote:

晴宝的诗很有生活质感！多交流！！

问好谢谢感受,愿与诗友交流.
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Posted: 2010-11-30 06:52:00 Post subject:

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

宝儿的诗歌视野很宽，喜欢。

好早以前有那歌"我一见你就笑,你那翩翩风采太美妙"
学习白水.冬雪不断,道晚安.
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Posted: 2010-11-30 06:52:53 Post subject:

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古朴，古味，古香。学习。

巧克力,呵呵,问好北夫.
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Posted: 2010-12-05 07:26:04 Post subject:

《田野》有许多公共的图像,让人共鸣. 提读.

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Posted: 2010-12-05 07:43:04 Post subject:

风动好,感谢,问好. _________________ 晴宝儿

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