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微型诗第五辑(1-20首)
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 06:11:17    Post subject: 微型诗第五辑(1-20首) Reply with quote

1、淹没

迷失在水的怀中
你的爱卷来
我化为一尾游鱼


2、又遇芦苇

河岸,一群芦苇
头发老了
腰很年青


3、惊落

阳光一声问候
惊落,我的影子
在大地心头,偎得更紧

4、邂逅

人潮中,我是一朵浪花
席卷着,撞在
你伟岸的胸口

5、白发

渐渐明白
老,爬上头顶
豁达,一页页掀开


6、保姆

在他人巢穴里,飞来飞去
翅膀虽硬
却没有自己的天空

7、短信

天凉了
发,一串家乡的阳光
给你添暖

8、秀发

惟你头顶那团黑暗
攒动我的心
美丽,每一次翘盼

9、吊兰

真是奇谲诡怪
被吊起来
反更风景


10、秋菊

顺着风的手指
你的摇曳
左右了,一片秋色

11、二月风

揉皱了一池春水
却不能阻止,爱的暗流


12、海吻

海浪扑过来,吻我的嘴唇
向我表达
她苦涩的爱情


13、红蜻蜓

池水掩映,小荷拔尖
绯红的梦
摇醉,我的心扉

14、古井

砌石井然有序
水齐整
乱了,一桶星辰


15、春江月

平铺直述,再搓长
九曲十八弯
弯弯,入梦乡


16、口碑

词语砌的
比石头刻的
更坚固,更持久


17、苍蝇

在苍蝇眼里
世界永远,脏兮兮

18、蝉之爱

一声声,叫火阳光
打,我的脸


19、水浮石

什么都怕浮
一浮
石头也会钻出水面

20、湖畔看柳

湖畔,扬鞭
打绿归来
骑,一树春
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 07:43:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

水浮石

什么都怕浮
一浮
石头也会钻出水面


改成如何



怕什么
石头也会钻出水面
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 15:19:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组优美的哲理小诗。顶了
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 17:54:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

水浮石

什么都怕浮
一浮
石头也会钻出水面


改成如何



怕什么
石头也会钻出水面

这样一改,确实简洁多了,多谢斑竹指点!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-29 18:01:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈,这才是真正的流星雨呢 Very Happy
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