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太阳就是那样的一位雕刻手

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hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-11-19 18:38:56 Post subject: 太阳就是那样的一位雕刻手

雕出影子伴你让人间显得不再寂寞如果没有阴影，一棵树还是不是一棵完整的树而内心的世界难免几分缺憾生命就是这样的一座空洞的浮雕如果阳光是一碗烈性的白酒只有年轮才可能品出其中的韵味这么多年了，万岁的都没有万岁过千岁的往往不如百岁的谁可能避免这样的结局：重归故土遭木匠之手或者被医生解剖药水浸泡更干脆的是付诸一把熊熊的烈火任水东流任一江春水东流去吧浊酒一勺谁生来都不是光也许黑暗才是常态出去寻找源头的人再也没有回来多少人在我之前死去多少人在我之后也将死去我们的火会突然熄灭或许缺陷才是完美的对歌当酒，影子啊给我捧上一坛烈性的阳光吧你看我不醉不吐出这一地的鲜血哪一棵枫树不倚着秋风再倚斜阳啊 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-11-20 02:54:03 Post subject:

呵呵，李白月下独酌，島主陽光下独酌。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2010-11-20 09:13:27 Post subject:

你也来一杯，不是月光，就是阳光 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-11-21 20:17:46 Post subject:

任水东流任一江春水东流去吧浊酒一勺谁生来都不是光也许黑暗才是常态出去寻找源头的人再也没有回来多少人在我之前死去多少人在我之后也将死去我们的火会突然熄灭或许缺陷才是完美的透通，冷静。 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2010-11-25 16:07:53 Post subject:

这么多年了，万岁的都没有万岁过千岁的往往不如百岁的谁可能避免这样的结局：重归故土遭木匠之手或者被医生解剖药水浸泡更干脆的是付诸一把熊熊的烈火人说难得糊涂，你却难得的明白，看来还没喝醉

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-11-25 17:00:10 Post subject:

这诗歌是不是太理性了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-11-25 19:00:28 Post subject:

继续喝，接着写

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Posted: 2010-11-27 08:37:50 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

这诗歌是不是太理性了
Very Happy

想喝就喝嘛

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Posted: 2010-11-27 08:38:28 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

继续喝，接着写

哈哈握握
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Posted: 2010-11-28 04:18:28 Post subject:

那个翻译很准确，但整篇翻译为什么不理睬呢？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2010-11-28 04:56:28 Post subject:

一种很豁达的境界，带动诗意的语言，随意吞吐。 _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

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Posted: 2010-11-28 15:30:31 Post subject:

诗作大气 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2010-11-28 15:35:25 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

继续喝，接着写

哈哈握握

握握哈哈

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Posted: 2010-11-28 15:36:18 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

那个翻译很准确，但整篇翻译为什么不理睬呢？ Very Happy

问好冲浪，等你翻译呢 Very Happy

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Posted: 2010-11-28 16:16:24 Post subject:

哪个翻译？我现在的理解力愈来愈差了感谢朋友们的鼓励 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-11-29 02:14:34 Post subject:

这首诗很豪放，看透世界的感觉，无所畏惧。我是说兄创造的翻译工具。我利用它翻译文章呢，汉英互译。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2010-11-29 05:41:16 Post subject:

真正的完美就是它的不完美吧~~那么一点不完美点缀着~被我们热爱的心给消化了~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-11-29 07:40:26 Post subject:

感谢冲浪和安安 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-12-01 21:04:16 Post subject:

读着前边觉得有地方该加标点才易看，有地方显得罗嗦读到后边，一个字：狂。醉狂？思狂？字狂？但感觉整体还是很完整 ——像“多少人在我之前死去多少人在我之后也将死去 ” 该再多些节制，现在这样有点儿影响飞翔了。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-12-02 22:46:49 Post subject:

感谢金金行文基本是白话，在去除所有的诗艺上的东西，文字还可以剩下多少内涵和诗意呢 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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