。 Thorough enjoyment Jordan's levitation
。 Most brilliant the ksana of fireworks in the night sky
。Chance encounter of weeds is the beauty of being rootless and inability to follow-suit
。 Melody versus audience countless of "most-loved", fidelity is irrelavent
。 The aesthetic of waving is in its heart-felt honesty
。 Regardlessof its good-bye or else ...
。 Jordan's Air-time is captive within basketball, a whole generation of un-puncture-able sentiment
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection
Posted: 2007-04-03 20:43:56 Post subject:
yes, it has good multiplex orders with nouns/phrases/clauses as the first order elements. I have to think more about the verb ("is" in this case) use that might limit arrangement, just a thought.
"the beauty of being rootless and inability to follow-suit "
will also be a good one in a different poem for immigrants, I feel. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）
Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection
Posted: 2007-04-03 23:24:34 Post subject:
博弈 wrote:
yes, it has good multiplex orders with nouns/phrases/clauses as the first order elements. I have to think more about the verb ("is" in this case) use that might limit arrangement, just a thought.
"the beauty of being rootless and inability to follow-suit "
will also be a good one in a different poem for immigrants, I feel.
It is fun to discuss poetry with you...
You brought up an interesting observation, let me have a
good brainstorming....
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