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秋色
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PostPosted: 2010-10-23 17:46:16    Post subject: 秋色 Reply with quote

浪淘沙 - 秋色

声消雁陣没秋空,收尽雲霞溢暮風。
冉冉玉盘銀汉盛,满階金葉月明中。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-23 20:28:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白云兄!
秋,在不同人的笔下有着不同情感。在白云兄笔下没有那种“秋风秋雨愁煞人”的感觉,同样是落叶,白云兄决没有把它写成枯呀萎什么的,有的是金光片片。这种积极向上的人生观值得学习!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-24 02:15:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

冉冉玉盘銀汉盛,满階金葉月明中。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-24 02:16:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

丰盛惬意之感
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PostPosted: 2010-10-24 04:24:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

冉冉玉盘銀汉盛,满階金葉月明中。

秋色意境,笔下尽显。好!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-24 07:59:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,我是希望通過诗词的吟唱,与朋友们一起去欣赏大自然的色彩,去丰盛我們的人生.
自弹自唱,自我欣赏,自得其乐也!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-24 08:01:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝影沉寒水欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-24 08:03:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝庆宏赏评!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-24 14:30:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="白云闲人"]笑聊,我是希望通過诗词的吟唱,与朋友们一起去欣赏大自然的色彩,去丰盛我們的人生.

问好兄长(老师)!说的有道理,我记下了。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-25 12:57:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊共鳴!
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PostPosted: 2010-10-25 18:25:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好兄长(老师)!读秋色词:
声消雁陣没秋空,收尽雲霞溢暮風。
冉冉玉盘銀汉盛,满階金葉月明中。

想着冉冉明月悬于中天,阶下金叶翩翩起舞。思绪翻滚,感而赋诗和之:

吟诗不必尽言愁,硕果盈枝满是秋。

云淡神平风物盛,日高气爽目光柔。

山河荡荡胸怀畅,寰宇清清脑海幽。

莫管今朝多少事,且将郁闷付东流。
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PostPosted: 2010-10-26 07:46:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊和诗!
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