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悼诗友犀利

晓松
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Posted: 2010-10-01 20:10:14 Post subject: 悼诗友犀利

如梦令悼诗友犀利脍炙诗篇历历，人却天国各异。疑是梦萦中，窗外风声淅沥。淅沥。淅沥。恰似声声抽泣。隽笔直抒胸臆，胜过竹林才气。坚韧又执着，时而笔锋犀利。犀利。犀利。众友焉能忘记！

林芳萍
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Posted: 2010-10-02 00:03:15 Post subject:

犀利。犀利。众友焉能忘记！诗友情深！

白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-10-02 07:41:04 Post subject:

窗外风声淅沥,隽筆直抒胸臆. 深情的詞! 問好晓松! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

冰清
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2010-10-02 19:17:14 Post subject:

脍炙诗篇历历，人却天国各异。疑是梦萦中，窗外风声淅沥。淅沥。淅沥。恰似声声抽泣。晓松好词：悲声切切，情见乎辞。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-10-02 20:01:36 Post subject:

悲情词悼犀利君。

晓松
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Posts: 1192

晓松Collection

Posted: 2010-10-05 17:29:02 Post subject:

林芳萍 wrote:

犀利。犀利。
众友焉能忘记！

诗友情深！

问候林芳萍！犀利是我们共同的诗友，我们难以忘记。

晓松
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Posted: 2010-10-05 17:44:24 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

窗外风声淅沥,隽筆直抒胸臆. 深情的詞!
問好晓松!

问好白云兄！笔耕不止，妙语连珠，可敬可佩！多多保重。

晓松
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Posted: 2010-10-05 18:21:41 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

晓松好词：悲声切切，情见乎辞。

感谢冰清老师第一时间披露犀利不幸逝世的消息，早些时间只知道他患病，可没想到走的这么快，前不久，他还在发表诗作。最近才得知，他是在一面同病魔搏斗，一面写诗，并且想在有生之年完成自己的目标，因此我说他“坚韧又执着”。
有段时间没上网了，只是时常浏览一下。但当我看到诗友不幸逝世的消息时，按捺不住了，一定要出来送他一程。现在回头看我写的诗，尚有可改之处。不动了，这就是我当时心情的写照。只要尽了心，目的就到了。
最后还望冰清老师多加保重，有您这样重情义，懂艺术的老师和诗友，我感到欣慰，犀利也会感到欣慰的！

晓松
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Posted: 2010-10-05 18:31:10 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

悲情词悼犀利君。

庆宏兄，久违了。前些时见白水还说，庆宏近来佳作连连，可谓一发而不可收也，可喜可贺！

晓松
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Posted: 2010-10-05 18:34:06 Post subject:

我又要脱网一段时间，如有跟贴，回复可能迟一些，先表歉意。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-10-06 04:11:19 Post subject:

感人情深！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-10-06 07:10:37 Post subject:

謝晓松! 曉松,回首看舊诗,描繪當時情,只要尽了心,一切就安然! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-10-06 08:26:49 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

悲情词悼犀利君。

庆宏兄，久违了。前些时见白水还说，庆宏近来佳作连连，可谓一发而不可收也，可喜可贺！

谢晓松，多保重！

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