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PostPosted: 2010-09-03 13:18:05    Post subject: 流星*雨 Reply with quote

流星*雨

(一)
送君几程
此处又逢驿站
当别了,挑一匹上好的枣红马儿与你
却迟迟不肯举鞭

旅途好远,好远好远的路哦
如果风,如果雨?
美酒好醉终不抵三餐羹汤
此一别
哪天?才是你的归期

(二)
该说的已经说完,没说的
已埋入云丘
云丘朦胧,朦胧如你躬身
躬如坟茔或是庙宇就不需介意了
每年的那一天
我一定会燃一点香火,为你
既不是沉月,也不是
流星

(三)
与君一别, 今天当是明年的忌日
你轻声:‘瞧你,又哭’
天在雨,好大的雨
下到山崩
崩到雷鸣不知所措

生离怎道死别?
不及有痛,不及诗歌,那些所有关于离别的
伤逝,来不及述说

夜深时,当浅寐
浅寐在雨,好大的雨
还有那些浓云,那些泥浆,那些石头
铺天盖地的
打开来就是上帝的被褥
睡吧,安静地,让我们不别而梦
不再天明

(四)
没错,这是一个没有结尾的故事
姐姐说,这些是写给你的
而我笑笑
谁说不是给他?

人生难免太多的过错
错过的
就让它错过吧
你看昨天那只落地的苹果
你没吃
今天就发了芽儿

(五)
没人在乎你到底是个角儿,或者
是个疯子,没人在乎
你肮脏的衣领是否能够附庸风雅
其实不必
不必打磨多棱的晶体反射太阳的光泽
你就是你

那天,当你狂傲地说:
“懂吗?他们?
诗歌只是流星瞬间划破的夜幕,一痕魅力的伤逝”
我笑了,顺手捡起些许撕碎的帷幔
抖落些许残存的陨石

窗外在雨, 好大的雨
是不是流星,我不想知道。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-03 16:17:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

流星划过,
寂静的夜空。
谁能永留,
浩瀚的苍穹?
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PostPosted: 2010-09-04 23:30:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

这是对谁的祭奠呢?
拥着这么好的诗句!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-05 06:19:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

崩到雷鸣不知所措

文字和感情都愈来愈饱满,喜欢
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PostPosted: 2010-09-06 19:12:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
流星划过,
寂静的夜空。
谁能永留,
浩瀚的苍穹?


问好庆宏, 谢谢理解
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PostPosted: 2010-09-06 19:27:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
这是对谁的祭奠呢?
拥着这么好的诗句!


问好老师。
伤别离,别离莫过于死。而死亡谁说不是永生?地震,泥石流,山体滑坡,,,,,,灾难袭来时,掩埋了多少凄美的故事。 愿他们安息,愿他们因了珍惜而超脱苦痛
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PostPosted: 2010-09-06 19:29:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
崩到雷鸣不知所措

文字和感情都愈来愈饱满,喜欢


问好peace, 谢谢鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 19:14:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

“送君几程
此处又逢驿站
当别了,挑一匹上好的枣红马儿与你
却迟迟不肯举鞭”

不肯举鞭,只因不忍别离。此去经年,没有深刻体会离情别绪的人是无法理会其中心情,无法写出如此凄美的字句的。
好诗,拜读!!
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无法忘记 无法触摸 无法在一起

Cannot forget Cannot touch Cannot be together

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残忍的过客。

我做不到不想你。

我做不到不爱你。


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PostPosted: 2010-09-07 19:19:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

夜深时,当浅寐
浅寐在雨,好大的雨
还有那些浓云,那些泥浆,那些石头
铺天盖地的
打开来就是上帝的被褥
睡吧,安静地,让我们不别而梦
不再天明


反复进来三次来看这些文字,体会~~~别样的感受!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 19:04:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

江苏卡卡 wrote:
“送君几程
此处又逢驿站
当别了,挑一匹上好的枣红马儿与你
却迟迟不肯举鞭”

不肯举鞭,只因不忍别离。此去经年,没有深刻体会离情别绪的人是无法理会其中心情,无法写出如此凄美的字句的。
好诗,拜读!!

...


谢谢鼓励,问好
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 19:05:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
夜深时,当浅寐 浅寐在雨,好大的雨
还有那些浓云,那些泥浆,那些石头
铺天盖地的
打开来就是上帝的被褥
睡吧,安静地,让我们不别而梦
不再天明


反复进来三次来看这些文字,体会~~~别样的感受!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 08:29:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

离多聚少,总在相思中。
情深意浓,何时能重逢?
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 14:37:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

每个人生来都带着自已的悲欢离合~~若全归结于命运~~未免残忍了些~~当灾难突发性的降临时~~命运这个词还未被攥紧就永远的离开了~~~

真切的情意~~读之伤怀~~

问好白水~~
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 17:13:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得真好,欲说还休,没有泪流,心已伤过云丘 .......
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PostPosted: 2010-09-11 06:31:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

很不错的文字和表达,问好
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 18:52:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好庆宏,红红,仙子, 春花秋月
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 18:57:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

那天,当你狂傲地说:
“懂吗?他们?
诗歌只是流星瞬间划破的夜幕,一痕魅力的伤逝”
我笑了,顺手捡起些许撕碎的帷幔
抖落些许残存的陨石
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PostPosted: 2010-09-23 00:57:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

这是对谁的祭奠呢?
拥着这么好的诗句!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-23 18:40:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

你看昨天那只落地的苹果
你没吃
今天就发了芽儿

诗歌的苹果还在,世界的苹果正自由生长。
白水好吗。
有的文字只是文字,有的文字很轻易就进入林子深处,那些种苹果的人,那些身体里长着小树林的人。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-26 03:49:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

那天,当你狂傲地说:
“懂吗?他们?
诗歌只是流星瞬间划破的夜幕,一痕魅力的伤逝”
我笑了,顺手捡起些许撕碎的帷幔
抖落些许残存的陨石
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