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流星雨
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 18:50:38    Post subject: 流星雨 Reply with quote

流星雨

消息是从女儿那儿来的,女儿的消息是从电脑来的。据说她好几个朋友分别发来短讯:“今夜有流星雨,午夜12时,当是流星最密集的时刻。”流星雨,好有诱惑力的词汇,加上女儿不断地将她从网络搜索到的各种有关流星雨的信息转达给我,我脑海里便展开了一幅幅美妙的天象奇观。当然,我还没有浪漫到把流星雨想象成节日的礼花,但却期待哪怕只有两颗流星同时划破夜幕, 便可满足小小的好奇心了。

晚餐时,我们便开始鼓动先生同去。男人多是理性的,没兴趣去凑这个热闹,却经不住我和女儿的软缠硬磨,终于答应了我们的夜行计划,并建议约上两位喜好文学的朋友同行。朋友真给面子,晚上10点左右,便如约而至。大家落座后院,几小碟蔬果零食,品茶,聊天,加上不时寻找流星,仰面望月,倒也其乐融融。女儿一直在等,等待第一颗流星光临,我们便可驱车郊野,大饱眼福了。午夜将至,夜幕完好如初, 一丝也没有被流星划破。朋友辞别,大家第二天还要上班,我们也就无意挽留了。本欲去梦周公, 无奈女儿雅兴未减, 我只好答应与她同行。先生不愿再由着我们的性子,说是:“别听风就是雨的,大半夜了,也没看见一颗星星掉下来。要去你们自己去。”一句话,噎人个半死。 我和女儿一挤眼, 自己去就自己去!就不信离了男人什么都不能干了?我们悄没声溜出门,驾车融入夜色。四周很静,静的连声狗吠都没有。女儿悄声:“妈,真有点怕。”我虽无言,却也同感,只好打道回府劳请先生大驾。

小车一溜烟避开城市主干道晃眼的灯光,潜入郊野公园的幽静。夏夜的星空,因了远离灯光,显得更辽阔,更深邃, 深蓝深蓝的,水洗般的干净。公园里,三五辆一堆的停车,三五个一群的人影,倒是我始料未及的。还真有与我们一样痴情到傻的人呐, 流星雨?明知不得见而为之。好奇地侧目,我发现一个个小群体几乎全是年轻人。 那些充满活力的身影像一棵棵挺拔的小树,向着天空张开一双双探索的眼睛,好奇的目光闪烁着,火热火热的, 多美的星星啊, 一颗又一颗,这些才是最值得我们珍惜的。回眸女儿的眼睛,单纯的,求知的,渴望的, 任何流星都无法比拟的,两颗真实,执着的星星。别了,流星雨。那些燃烧竭尽的陨石,那些稍纵即逝光影。

是夜,我做了一个美丽的梦。梦中有许多星星, 忽闪忽闪的,好像女儿忽闪的眼睛,她忽闪着眼睛好奇地问:“为什么今夜没下流星雨?”
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2010-09-08 20:32:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

流星雨在大地上、青春里和希望中。问好白水君!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 08:41:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

美好的希望存在于永远的等待中。如果等到了,希望也就消失了。

年轻人总有梦,白水兄倒和女儿成了同龄人。不象母女,胜似姐妹。难得的温馨,难得的亲情加友情。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 12:51:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
流星雨在大地上、青春里和希望中。问好白水君!


是啊,年轻人是世界的未来。 问好道模
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 13:01:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
美好的希望存在于永远的等待中。如果等到了,希望也就消失了。

年轻人总有梦,白水兄倒和女儿成了同龄人。不象母女,胜似姐妹。难得的温馨,难得的亲情加友情。
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谢谢庆宏,哲理的思索。 又一次证明了性别不同思维方式的差异。
我们这叫保护他们的好奇心。好奇是创造之源, 有梦才会博。 Very Happy
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一身灰
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PostPosted: 2010-09-09 23:03:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

流星雨,流星雨。让人哲思。
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2010-09-10 08:01:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

含蓄而深婉。

最喜点睛之笔,意犹未尽!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-11 23:01:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

结尾的确乃点精之笔,赞!
问白水母女好!
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 19:42:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

一身灰 wrote:
流星雨,流星雨。让人哲思。


问好一身灰, 谢谢阅评
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 19:43:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
含蓄而深婉。

最喜点睛之笔,意犹未尽!


谢谢鼓励, 问好
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PostPosted: 2010-09-12 19:45:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
结尾的确乃点精之笔,赞!
问白水母女好!


谢谢荷梦,等你新作。问好
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PostPosted: 2010-09-13 04:08:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

只怕会让你失望了,我现在近乎朝五暮九地忙碌着,已经没有时间写了。。。。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-16 04:30:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错。
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PostPosted: 2010-09-23 04:49:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

很精致的一篇散文,洋溢着母爱和童心。
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