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醒酒
劉金雄
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PostPosted: 2010-08-22 07:30:25    Post subject: 醒酒 Reply with quote

酒窖蘊藏三十年的紅酒
就要在你面前
揭開面紗

一具等待解剖的木乃伊
軟木塞是通往過去的石壁門
是鎖在私密處的貞操帶
非得一番功夫
這保存三十年的貞操啊

啵的一聲被粗暴地打開

瓊漿緩緩倒入妳的高腳杯
輕握杯柄
莫讓手心的溫度破壞它的香醇

別急著窺盡這守候多年的矜持
有太多感情與歷史包袱
不是乾杯就
一了百了

淺嚐即可
恩恩怨怨三十載
請先讓我從沉睡中
慢慢甦醒過來

好嗎?
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博弈
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PostPosted: 2010-08-22 17:13:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

特别!味道不单纯。Laughing

30年,不便宜哦。
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劉金雄
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PostPosted: 2010-08-23 06:32:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
特别!味道不单纯。Laughing

30年,不便宜哦。


博弈兄:

有朋自遠方來,當然要拿好貨
可惜酒未醒,人已醉!

金雄問好!
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上城
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PostPosted: 2010-08-25 20:41:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

30而立,30年的酒正意气风发,痛饮。酒未醒,人已醉!
是怎样的朋友自远方而来?一定不是男朋友,怕是女朋友,
许久不见,哪管醒与不醒,恨不得马上饮一口。 Cool

这样的朋友一定够交情。
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劉金雄
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PostPosted: 2010-08-30 07:17:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

上城 wrote:
30而立,30年的酒正意气风发,痛饮。酒未醒,人已醉!
...


上城詩友:

通常是多年不見的老朋友
我們談論的都是過去共有的回憶、經歷
總是等不及紅酒醒酒
便醉了

酒未醒,人已醉

感謝點評!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-30 18:45:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

好有就像一瓶好酒,越陈越浓郁,越香醇。岁月见真情 Embarassed
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