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胡写
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PostPosted: 2007-03-28 16:28:05    Post subject: 胡写 Reply with quote

出浴


古說
春分登天秋潛淵
伏羲天水龍馬翻
鼓腹青光熙陽春
大澤上空走筆急
文如閃電詩如雷
蒙鼓詩人擂鼉皮
說那
曾經滄海難為水
除卻巫山不是雲
冰肌玉骨入浮磬
寶髻雲鬟飄香音
明哞皓齒淡娥眉
流波送盼擄君心
春色朱脣努東風
蔥纖十指露華濃
荷珠耦臂新出水
長頸粉肩靦腆重
柳腰款擺葉搖動
俏臀美腿聲輕從
娟腳蓮步不止處
婀娜娉婷悄無蹤
靈石玉乳羅衫攬
溫香軟玉氣幽蘭
膚若凝脂玉生煙
傾城懷玉亂
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2007-03-28 17:49:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

oneline朋友,要砖,想找便宜不是?谁有砖能轻易给你?玩笑话。
你的现代诗还是不错的,古诗也能写得好,干嘛要“胡写”?
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PostPosted: 2007-03-28 18:01:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

小气!连块砖也宝贝。我都和好水泥咧。咱家墙矮,羡慕人家庭院深深啊。 Smile
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