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卜算子-敢把相思吐
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PostPosted: 2010-08-06 14:35:05    Post subject: 卜算子-敢把相思吐 Reply with quote

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梦里观人生,魂魄飘离去。回首征途困苦时,未忍丝丝语。

夜雨落春花,泪涌知非汝。兀自欢颜作笑人,敢把相思吐?
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PostPosted: 2010-08-07 16:41:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

梵天竹和:
春伴落梅生,绮夢随君去。未忘芳菲滿苑時,攜手綿綿語。
萬樹易桃花,形似終非汝。臨牖無蹤那日人,怎得相思吐?
2010年8月7日臨屏即興。
困苦是人生,滿眼追求去。世道不公逆事行,痛徹辛酸語。
每日笑迎人,暗地防傷汝。溫飽求來不易食,豈敢相思吐!
10.0807臨屏即興回和。
梵天竹和:
苦海渡殘生,煩惱揮難去。步履維艱坎坷行,誰可聽心語?
一世命乖人,無處尋真汝。汗盡禾田力盡時,辛苦何須吐?
2010年8月7日臨屏打油。
最苦度光陰,煩惱何時去?處世待人善意行,傾訴心頭語。
可惜皺娥眉,真實難尋汝。利益當先恐後随,辛苦沒人吐。
10-08-07臨屏打油回和并問好先生。
梵天竹和:
夢斷恨光陰,轉瞬時光去。縱是謹言又慎行,難禁心頭語。
命舛枉凝眉,何問侬和汝?不盡愁雲緊伴随,何必逢人吐?
謝謝笑聊雅詞相和,回和一首以贈。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-07 17:59:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

梦里观人生,魂魄飘离去。回首征途困苦时,未忍丝丝语。

夜雨落春花,泪涌知非汝。兀自欢颜作笑人,敢把相思吐?

欣赏好词,问候笑聊诗友。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-08-07 23:58:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

情真并意切,快意相思吐.唱和皆佳!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 00:15:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

宁家珍 wrote:
梦里观人生,魂魄飘离去。回首征途困苦时,未忍丝丝语。
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谢谢家珍诗友鼓励!问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 00:19:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
情真并意切,快意相思吐.唱和皆佳!


谢谢黄老师雅评鼓励!问好。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 01:26:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

夜雨落春花,泪涌知非汝。兀自欢颜作笑人,敢把相思吐?

情真意切,感人肺腑。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 01:38:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

sliu6 wrote:
夜雨落春花,泪涌知非汝。兀自欢颜作笑人,敢把相思吐?
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谢谢提读雅评!问好!
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