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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 14:20:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:


你说上善若水
水主黑, 且克火
我茫茫然看海
看海上雪白的浪花
看太极图中黑白相拥的鱼儿,你中有我?

水至深则黑,那么火
至烈?那些黑黑红红的余烬

我不由得笑了
等你用雪白的胡子
轻轻地抹去万物




含苞者,从不吐蕊
直到那天
你扯破心肌打开满腹心事
血红的船帆
一页页
涨满

佛说
挂果时,花自落
不关风事



不醉人
只醉我,醉回唐朝
...


你中有我,我中有你;
黑白转换,循环不已;
宁静致远,平淡显奇;
柔能克刚,弱能胜强;
无能生有,少能聚多;
以静制动,以小制大;
。。。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 19:51:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

孟冲之 wrote:
血红的船帆
一页页
涨满

佛说
挂果时,花自落
不关风事


问好冲之 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 19:52:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
佛说
挂果时,花自落
不关风事

——特别欣赏!!


谢谢老师鼓励
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 19:56:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
诗歌究竟能存储多少?能够抒发情绪,发现美丽的语言和意境,就很不简单了
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问好peace,又在忙什么?你的大作何日问世 Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 19:59:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:

不醉人
只醉我,醉回唐朝
、、、、、、

回首月明,
今夕是何夕?

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旷野寻觅,舟楫平湖;抬眼望月,叩问天阕。

问好白水!
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你的回帖就是一首诗, 谢谢 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 20:01:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

金开 wrote:
这一组技巧至为圆熟。
学士学道之后,诗境大进。可贺。


谢谢朋友,希望读到你的作品。问好
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 20:08:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
白水,服了!
同样听讲座,你边听边想。从训诂、修辞、哲学思辨中展开艺术想象,用新诗记下你学习经文精髓的多方面感受。阴阳的对立、消长、转换,本来深奥难懂,但经你点染,它好像就在我们的身边。看得见,也摸得着!
...


冰清老师,你总是这么热情的鼓励诗友们。让人在以文会友的同时更学会了做人。谢谢你。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 20:11:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
你的<德>一首

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千百次的复述
从我的祖先结绳计数,到比尔盖茨们的
二进制。我常常
对着0 与1冥思苦想:
浑圆的光环真是“道”么? 或
是“无”。好比玉宇晴空
那枚圆润的明月

而“德”便是每个人头顶的1抹月光
得德或不得
月亮,都在天上


        腦
...


博士,你这是什么图? 解来听听,我真没看懂Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 20:18:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:


你中有我,我中有你;
黑白转换,循环不已;
宁静致远,平淡显奇;
柔能克刚,弱能胜强;
无能生有,少能聚多;
以静制动,以小制大;
。。。
...


问好庆宏,谢谢题诗,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-03 23:29:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
博弈 wrote:
你的<德>一首

Quote:


千百次的复述
从我的祖先结绳计数,到比尔盖茨们的
二进制。我常常
对着0 与1冥思苦想:
浑圆的光环真是“道”么? 或
是“无”。好比玉宇晴空
那枚圆润的明月

而“德”便是每个人头顶的1抹月光
得德或不得
月亮,都在天上


        腦
...


博士,你这是什么图? 解来听听,我真没看懂Embarassed


文配圖,圖配文,一個巧合罷。
中华文化内涵的核心思想是天地人三才;地天泰。
你的01,无(空),道(@, at sign),
1抹月光,“)”等等,在图里以
文字画展现,三维的。人自时空长廊走来,
现今晚晚把“@"当月亮,去掉电脑,回归真月。
这也是《笔电之死》里的图像诗。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-04 13:14:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有创意的图像诗, 谢谢博士。等你的《笔电之死》

悄悄告诉你,其实我每天晚上都会到院外的草坪看月亮,而且几乎每天都会碰见一只褐色的小兔子,我和它说话,它就会停下来看着我。我女儿只乐,说那只小兔能听懂我说话。我诗歌中月宫溜出来的小兔子,就是它给我的灵感。猜想它也想食人间烟火了 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-05 17:16:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

白白姊妹,我们网站的刊物《商海儒风》创刊号出版了,选了你发过去的那首诗。把你的详细地址给我,我给你寄样刊。另外麻烦你把hepingdao先生的地址也给我,我想也给他寄一本。谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-05 21:29:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄真是太有才了!!!!
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PostPosted: 2010-08-06 08:18:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2010-08-06 18:39:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

一品红 wrote:
白白姊妹,我们网站的刊物《商海儒风》创刊号出版了,选了你发过去的那首诗。把你的详细地址给我,我给你寄样刊。另外麻烦你把hepingdao先生的地址也给我,我想也给他寄一本。谢谢!
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祝贺你们。
谢谢了。
我的地址:
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红,你一回来,peace就回来了,还是让他自己把地址给你吧 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-06 18:44:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
白水兄真是太有才了!!!!


海军,久不回来,回来就让我笑晕 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-06 18:51:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
报到
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HI, 这儿:
一品红 wrote:
白白姊妹,我们网站的刊物《商海儒风》创刊号出版了,选了你发过去的那首诗。把你的详细地址给我,我给你寄样刊。另外麻烦你把hepingdao先生的地址也给我,我想也给他寄一本。谢谢!
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你自己把地址给红吧,准确些。
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PostPosted: 2010-08-07 12:02:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

祝贺一品红和《商海儒风》

我的地址:
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 01:07:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
一品红 wrote:
白白姊妹,我们网站的刊物《商海儒风》创刊号出版了,选了你发过去的那首诗。把你的详细地址给我,我给你寄样刊。另外麻烦你把hepingdao先生的地址也给我,我想也给他寄一本。谢谢!
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祝贺你们。
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好的,看到了。很快就寄过去。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2010-08-08 01:17:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

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祝贺一品红和《商海儒风》
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好的,看到了,谢谢! Laughing
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