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顶针格七律-叠前韵端阳随想

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-06-18 04:32:52 Post subject: 顶针格七律-叠前韵端阳随想

顶针格七律-叠前韵端阳随想文/笑聊（二）酬罢诗词醉卧楼，楼屏隔断汨江流。流经腹海千千影，影入眸池月月悠。悠贵心仪琴瑟调，调扬抱负凯歌谋。（原句对仗不工）谋来韵律新时句，句转音长史册酬。

宁家珍
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Posted: 2010-06-19 02:25:12 Post subject:

欣赏顶针好律，问候笑聊版主。

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Posted: 2010-06-19 04:17:58 Post subject:

谢谢宁家珍诗友厚爱！问候诗友！这首七律的颈联，对仗有问题，要重新斟酌。

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