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大西北组诗:雪或者月
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PostPosted: 2010-06-16 20:14:47    Post subject: 大西北组诗:雪或者月 Reply with quote

何建生:诗二首  
  
  
■雪
  
  今夜,我在一首诗歌里
  用信天游的腔调喊你
  
  对着天。天蓝蓝
  对着风。风漫漫
  对着大西北的落日
  大漠落日浴血
  犹如传说中生死相许的爱恋
  
  生命中的大西北
  我是心怀羞怯的过客
  在无人注视的角落
  用诗歌的语言练习喊你
  喊你洁白无瑕的名字
  
  喊着喊着
  满天都是我洁白的呼唤
  喊着喊着
  天空就被洁白如羽的星星占据
  
  哦,我爱着的人
  你躲在哪一朵雪花里呢
  仿佛每一朵星星的笑脸
  都有着她生动的眉眼
  
  大西北,天山皑皑
  荒塬喧嚣,贺兰雄伟
  洁白的誓言
  曾埋下胡人的弯刀和弓箭
  爱情的传说美的令人内心纠结
  
  大西北,驿站远去
  冈斯底里的风汹涌凛冽
  黄河母亲的脸庞
  挂着圣洁的微笑
  我薄如蝉翼的思念身心透彻
  铸情成诗。以血养雪
  
  我把我的情诗
  写在你洁白的名字上
  风来翻阅,阳光收藏
  大地潮湿的胸怀
  爱是生命的源泉
  泪是世上最干净的水
    
  
■月
  
  犹记得那晚
  大西北七月的天空
  墨蓝似染
  
  一圆明月高悬
  像极了一面倒挂于湖泊的镜子
  银光如洗,光洁透亮
  月亮之上的宫廷若隐若现
  
  白云飘渺
  我以为是私奔的嫦娥
  随风飘飘的衣袂
  
  一棵树在月中
  吴刚的斧头总是砍它不倒
  我知道那里面有一段
  根深蒂固的孽情
  凄美天上人间一万年
  
  在月下,我头枕
  麦秸垛堆砌的童话
  仰望的天空,星星低语
  它们用晖光和晖光在谈恋爱
  
  那晚的月亮真干净啊
  没有被工业污染的天空
  真干净啊
  玻璃一样透明的云天
  就像那时我爱你的心
  透彻得一揽无余
  
  月上中天,夜更深
  天空明净高远。耳边的小溪
  流淌着钢琴般的交响乐
  
  蛐蛐儿宁静着大地的呼吸
  我的内心却山呼海啸
  只为我等待的人
  我听到她踩着月光的狐步
  带着一身干净的露水
  芳香的来到我的身旁
  
  情难自禁
  我们拥紧彼此突突的心跳
  十指相扣
  以爱情的名义
  私奔到月亮的故乡
  
  
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PostPosted: 2010-06-16 20:55:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

纯净的抒情

泪是世上最干净的水
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PostPosted: 2010-06-18 05:47:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-18 05:54:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一首诗里用了五六个洁白~情感的方向很好~~表达上累赘了~~
我也很怀念新疆的月亮~~
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