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《标点符号咏叹调》

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-03 14:42:57 Post subject: 《标点符号咏叹调》

《标点符号咏叹调》种，，，，，，每当种下每一句话都不曾说完省略.... ... ... 如雨暂时的无言放逐了冒号：放逐了我空空的引“ ” 如遇破折---- 让我们等，寂寥地，等待破土的嫩芽歪着小脑袋问？花开时可有标点些许规范约束？美人儿步履总是畅通无阻（括弧，有绿叶铺路）直到瓜熟蒂落。句号，当是圆满的标志。奈何秋风乍起残叶归根！！！！！！光棍悬挂着屋檐下冬季的冰条莫感叹！那点若即若离的泪珠，不是春风，谁？能吹落后记：对着《》顶礼膜拜，于是就有了这分行的文字

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Posted: 2010-06-03 17:14:27 Post subject:

和一个星之標點詠嘆我在天上寻找＊＊　　　（我在天上寻找星星）一程－一程　　　　　　（一程连接一程）路有——　　　　　　　（路有破折）大地是一本《》　　　　（大地是一本书名），“ ”我的好奇　　　　　（逗引我的好奇）。；五湖　　　　　　　（句分五湖）囊（）四海　　　　　　　（囊括四海） ……了 • 我、时：进　（省略了间隔我顿时冒进）！回头？前路　　　　　（叹回头问前路）＊＊已掉落＃底　　　　（星星已掉落井底） _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-03 19:10:23 Post subject:

酷。谢谢和诗。收藏了

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Posted: 2010-06-03 19:12:46 Post subject:

博弈和的真的比白水好。至少语句通顺。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-03 19:19:11 Post subject:

上城 wrote:

博弈和的真的比白水好。至少语句通顺。 Smile

不是吧，我的语句不通顺？主要是你没用形象思维。抬一小杠，逃跑了 Wink

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Posted: 2010-06-03 19:39:27 Post subject:

上城大概没玩过甜菜根四季攻略白水正在他的菜圃写红楼偏那蜗牛侵城掠地目无老庄于是摆下这奇门遁甲标符欲知前期故事，请看 http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=30278 内之篇我呢，抽空到天上种星星，牛郎不准上城来。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2010-06-04 02:40:20 Post subject:

符号们都乐了~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-05 16:26:36 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

上城大概没玩过甜菜根四季攻略
...

问好博士，谢谢理解 Very Happy

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Posted: 2010-06-05 16:30:44 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

符号们都乐了~~

红，乐就好

想当初很喜欢临屏和诗，如今成了一种奢侈了，，，，，， Wink

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Posted: 2010-06-05 17:18:02 Post subject:

都是人才，致敬！

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Posted: 2010-06-06 06:23:12 Post subject:

问好才女.

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