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《标点符号咏叹调》
白水
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PostPosted: 2010-06-03 14:42:57    Post subject: 《标点符号咏叹调》 Reply with quote

《标点符号咏叹调》

种,,,,,,
每当种下
每一句话都不曾说完
省略.... ... ...
如雨

暂时的无言放逐了冒号:
放逐了我空空的引“ ”

如遇破折----
让我们
等,寂寥地,等待破土的嫩芽
歪着小脑袋问?
花开时可有标点些许规范约束?

美人儿步履总是畅通无阻
(括弧, 有绿叶铺路)
直到瓜熟蒂落。句号,当是圆满的标志。
奈何秋风乍起 残叶归根!!!
!!!光棍
悬挂着屋檐下冬季的冰条
莫感叹!
那点若即若离的泪珠,不是春风,谁?
能吹落


后记:对着《》顶礼膜拜, 于是就有了这分行的文字
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博弈
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PostPosted: 2010-06-03 17:14:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

和一个

星之標點詠嘆

我在天上寻找**   (我在天上寻找星星)
一程-一程       (一程连接一程)
路有——       (路有破折)
大地是一本《》    (大地是一本书名)
,“ ”我的好奇     (逗引我的好奇)
。;五湖        (句分五湖)
囊()四海       (囊括四海)
……了 • 我、时 :进   (省略了间隔我顿时冒进)
!回头?前路     (叹回头问前路)
**已掉落#底     (星星已掉落井底)
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-06-03 19:10:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy 酷。
谢谢和诗。收藏了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-06-03 19:12:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈和的真的比白水好。至少语句通顺。 Smile Smile
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PostPosted: 2010-06-03 19:19:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

上城 wrote:
博弈和的真的比白水好。至少语句通顺。 Smile Smile


不是吧,我的语句不通顺?主要是你没用形象思维。抬一小杠,逃跑了 Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-06-03 19:39:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

上城大概没玩过甜菜根四季攻略
白水正在他的菜圃写红楼
偏那蜗牛侵城掠地目无老庄
于是摆下这奇门遁甲标符
欲知前期故事,请看
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=30278
内之Exclamation

我呢,抽空到天上种星星,牛郎不准上城来。 Arrow
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PostPosted: 2010-06-04 02:40:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

符号们都乐了~~
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PostPosted: 2010-06-05 16:26:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
上城大概没玩过甜菜根四季攻略
...


Very Happy Very Happy问好博士, 谢谢理解 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-06-05 16:30:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
符号们都乐了~~


红,乐就好 Very Happy

想当初很喜欢临屏和诗, 如今成了一种奢侈了,,,,,, Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-06-05 17:18:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

都是人才,致敬!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-06 06:23:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好才女.
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