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凝望黄鹤楼(组诗)
心如婉月
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PostPosted: 2010-05-15 20:42:24    Post subject: 凝望黄鹤楼(组诗) Reply with quote

凝望黄鹤楼(组诗)

◆走近黄鹤楼

文人骚客怀揣笔墨纸砚
在江水之上撒落铿锵音符
今天,我只携带两袖清风和一颗仰视之心
走近黄鹤楼,走近一只站立千年的鸟影

我不折柳,不惜别,前来与知己相聚
我知道李白已乘舟越过巴山群峰
崔颢驾云在鹦鹉洲上临风踏歌
岸边,每一棵小草都藏着一个光芒四射的背影

我们推杯换盏,歌尽桃萼
坐红烟花三月。黄鹤楼打开翅膀
驮起羽扇纶巾,驮起蓝天彩霞
长江解下丝带绾起长安,我们共醉一轮明月

走近黄鹤楼,倾听老友旧曲
我的足迹嵌入荆楚故地,掬起玉笛声声
拆开一滴滴鸟鸣,嗅到
渗透肺腑的古诗馨香

◆登黄鹤楼

登黄鹤楼,拜访一位黄袍长髯的老者
他站在江汉水湄,放养云鹤
鹤鸣,在江岸卷起千堆雪
惊起铜钟高一声,低一声

光线在眸子里一米米增高
视野在绿色家园一层层延伸
黄鹤楼倚龙而起,架起云梯
我的影子漫入楼台一半,云里一半

烟尘被潇湘之水涤荡澄澈
黄鹤在故乡落地生根
像竹笋拔节吸纳天地新鲜气息
让鹤发童颜的老人驻足,时光在脚下恍然已奔腾千年

它生在江南,却从骨子里抽出钢铁光芒
照亮乱石锋利的尘世
让我相信自己千年前就是它翅上的羽
昂起头颅,不忧不惧,活出内心的力量

◆与一座楼对坐

今夜,你是一盏灯
从流水之上浮起,沉淀了金戈铁马
沉淀了电闪雷鸣。宁静,舒展
将十万亩江水揽入怀中,有光从体内溢出

点燃唐代的油,拨亮宋朝的棉芯
我的眸子在夜晚不转弯,不低垂,以你为中心
那些光奔泻,像梨花撒落
站在我的肩上,奏起提琴,历久弥新

你眼含烟波,唇衔云朵
遮蔽尘埃,绽开绝世容颜
你居长江头,我坐在长江尾
与你对坐,温度沿着清流传递

你是从武汉泥土里拱出的一盏神灯
风雨浇不灭,刀斧砍不倒。今夜,我只读你
敞开心扉,把灯花一朵朵移植到骨髓深处
我们不谈沧桑,只说春风千里相见欢

◆神农百草园的香草

作为植物,我放低姿势
匍匐于泥土之上。披上阳光
抵御寒冷荣辱。饮下露珠
解除虚妄饥渴。倾尽终生之力释放氧气

作为青草,神农唇间流转的一缕香
崇尚天然,回归本性。以身体为炉鼎
放入三钱清风,五两明月。打坐,修行
将头顶的星辰和肺腑的爱熬成一剂中药

打通任督二脉,益气养颜
祛除心浮气躁,祛除雀斑,梗塞,结石
挖掘绿色通道,给生命疗伤
让健康流溢淡雅清香,露出幸福表情

我是江城土壤里的一株香草
请唤我别名:黄鹤楼
内心揣着云朵河流
以自然之道托起人间清明,乾坤朗朗
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大侠仙子
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PostPosted: 2010-05-16 15:37:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

赛诗写成这样,不错了。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-17 02:13:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错~体积小容量大~用词迤逦行文若流水~~
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