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 Posted: 2010-05-05 14:02:43 Post subject: 七律 观《桃花扇》怀古 |
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七律 观《桃花扇》怀古
一扇桃花血色鲜，秦淮河畔几悲欢。
昏君忌重失良将，才女情深哭逝川。
人祸天灾千户苦，党争权斗百官贪。
世人尽指吴三桂，怒为红颜弃险关。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-05-05 17:33:43 Post subject: |
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庆宏,《桃花扇》诗愈写愈精,愈写愈妙!
有一点想研讨一下: 上闋第三句的"智少"是否值得再斟酌,因为究其根,并非智慧多少问题,而是猜忌心重,所以,可否将"智少"变为"忌重"呢? 供参攷.
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-05 18:53:51 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
庆宏,《桃花扇》诗愈写愈精,愈写愈妙!
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谢谢白云老师建议！崇祯的确是嫉妒心重心胸狭隘之人，故一再错杀良将自毁长城，导致军事上一败涂地大好河山毁于一旦，黎民百姓也饱受痛苦，作了近三百年被迫剃发留辫的亡国奴。 |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 05:42:20 Post subject: |
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问好庆宏兄！
这首七律把明末尖锐的社会矛盾揭露无遗。
欣赏了。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 07:06:57 Post subject: |
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庆宏,你对历史,很有研究,富有心得! 而我在这方面却是朦胧,多向你学习.
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 07:08:55 Post subject: |
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一扇桃花血色鲜，秦淮河畔几悲欢。
欣赏
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 08:32:54 Post subject: |
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| 笑聊 wrote: |
问好庆宏兄！
这首七律把明末尖锐的社会矛盾揭露无遗。
欣赏了。 |
谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 08:35:04 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
| 庆宏,你对历史,很有研究,富有心得! 而我在这方面却是朦胧,多向你学习. |
白云老师太客气！我们在诗坛上互相学习切磋，都很有收获，而且增加友谊。我也向你学到很多东西。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 08:35:34 Post subject: |
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| 影沉寒水 wrote: |
一扇桃花血色鲜，秦淮河畔几悲欢。
欣赏 |
谢谢寒水兄雅赏！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 08:36:23 Post subject: |
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昏君忌重失良将，才女情深哭逝川。
原句：昏君忌重失良将，才女情深付逝川。 |
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崔光全
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 14:06:46 Post subject: |
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| 勾勒了一段历史画面，雅俗共赏。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-06 16:58:13 Post subject: |
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| 崔光全 wrote: |
| 勾勒了一段历史画面，雅俗共赏。 |
谢诗友雅评。 |
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