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方向(外一首)

徐业华
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Posted: 2010-03-23 01:03:40 Post subject: 方向(外一首)

方向(外一首) 射出的箭如能校正方向我不会把一支箭射在稻草人身上假如一只脚已踩在西瓜皮上千万别当做滑板方向在树林中与你捉迷藏时可要记得树木朝阳与背阴的区别我在试着为漂流瓶安装罗盘然后再选择是逆流而上还是顺流而下 2010、03、20 那朵桃花春风有几天了，雨水再次酥软枝头的坚硬江南或者尘世间，最活泼的意象又一次使用了障眼法，一个饱嗝，将昨晚觥筹交错的情景浮现。野菜馅的饺子，夹着当归的味道山中的雾，渐渐散去。那朵桃花从容端坐着。我则惶恐不安，担心一直抱守的谎言，被易容前的我相认或者戳穿 2010、03、23 _________________ 只有在寒冷的冬天，我们才能接近最纯净的光芒。

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Posted: 2010-03-23 08:41:37 Post subject:

诗意葱郁，句子从容老练，一如继往的喜欢。问好！

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