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咏花 --- ( 五 )
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PostPosted: 2010-03-13 20:20:47    Post subject: 咏花 --- ( 五 ) Reply with quote

* 杏 花 风 彩 *
< 调寄浣溪沙 >

春色满园引蝶蜂 ,
宫妆娇憨晓霞中 ,
丰姿多彩展花容 .

欲放含苞羞帶醉 ,
盛开白里透微红 ,
素裙飞舞戏东风 !
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PostPosted: 2010-03-13 22:22:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

春色满园引蝶蜂,丰姿多彩展花容 。
欲放含苞羞帶醉,素裙飞舞戏东风 !

好一个春色满园!赞!助兴临屏七绝-咏花和:

一夜春风绿满园,嫣红姹紫俏颜娴。
不负君恩临幸意,千娇百媚惹人怜。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 05:44:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

欲放含苞羞帶醉 ,
盛开白里透微红

最喜欢这两句

生动
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 10:32:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊兄和诗!
再和七绝一首:

色彩缤纷满园春,
杏花旖旎俏佳人.
一顰一笑偕风韵,
倩影清新脱俗尘.
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 10:39:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝影沉寒水点评欣赏!
杏花的生长很有特色: 含苞待放時呈纯红色; 灿烂盛放時白里透微红; 落花飘飞時却又变成纯白色! 真是色彩缤纷!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 18:29:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读先生咏花五首,描绘生动,想像丰富。。好诗一组!!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 19:18:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝sliu6雅评!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 19:35:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

“欲放含苞羞帶醉 , 盛开白里透微红 , ”欣赏,花亦人,人亦花。问好白云兄!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 19:50:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝运刚欣赏雅評!
問好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 20:22:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢春天,尤其喜欢在春天里开花的各色艳姿.再和一首:

面颊春风吻,群芳斗艳娇。
一颦三回首,满腹诗情标。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-15 09:40:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊兄和诗!
再和一首词:

* 咏 花 *
<调寄囉嗊曲>

得意春风娓 ,
满园众芳菲 .
怡情挥笔墨 ,
字字描珠璣 .
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