刘海
童生
Joined: 31 May 2009
Posts: 37
Location: 安徽六安
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 Posted: 2010-03-13 06:18:41 Post subject: 发一首拙诗《人生》，请诗友得空批批。 |
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《人 生》
人生在世只一回，困苦缠身莫叹悲。
名利从来身外物，古来人死化成灰。 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 06:54:06 Post subject: |
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人生匆匆几十载，困苦就当磨练来。
名利从来身外物，感恩回报真英才。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 07:33:20 Post subject: |
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人生瀚海驾轻舟，风雨征程何惧愁。
潇洒放歌搏一回，春花秋月在心留。 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 17:29:55 Post subject: |
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人生漫步乐逍遥,
懶管烟雲与浪潮.
名利风光今古話,
一杯香茗伴闲聊!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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刘海
童生
Joined: 31 May 2009
Posts: 37
Location: 安徽六安
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| Posted: 2010-03-14 22:25:05 Post subject: |
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| 诸位诗友，学习。 |
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刘海
童生
Joined: 31 May 2009
Posts: 37
Location: 安徽六安
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| Posted: 2010-03-21 22:30:04 Post subject: |
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| 诚邀路过的诗友，多提批评意见！ |
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