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蝶恋花-闹元宵
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PostPosted: 2010-02-15 19:46:15    Post subject: 蝶恋花-闹元宵 Reply with quote

(原创)蝶恋花.闹元宵
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 入夜声声侵耳鼓。闪亮天空,七彩缤纷吐。龙舞翻腾云相扈,花灯迷面竞猜处。

 三五良宵今又度。前擁呼儿,后堵帅哥抚。圆月伴君君知否,元宵今日普天趣!

注:这篇蝶恋花-闹元宵词写于去年元宵节。地点在无锡的南禅寺。“南朝四百八十寺,多少楼台烟雨中。”南禅寺正是四百八十寺之一,多次毁于战火,最后一次重建是清光绪年间。
南禅寺历来是热闹场所。遇到庙会及中秋、元宵诸节,更是热闹非凡。去年元宵节天气真好。入夜后,多彩灯光把南禅寺照的如同白昼。天空不时闪亮着七彩缤纷的火树银花。我去了南禅寺,真个是人山人海,熙熙攘攘。有舞龙灯的;有猜灯谜的;道两旁小商贩吆喝着;不时传来小孩啼哭;大人呼唤着孩子;老婆叫老公; 老太叫老头。要什么声音有什么声音。
可惜今年天公不作美(无锡地区有时有小雨),估计看不到去年的热闹场景了,这也是一大憾事。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-18 00:16:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

好热闹。。 舞龙,猜谜。。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-18 09:46:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

一片闹元宵之喜庆場面,欢声笑語,嬉戏偕趣!
问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-23 03:23:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="sliu6"]好热闹。。 舞龙,猜谜。。[/quote]
谢谢雅读赏评!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-23 03:27:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="白云闲人"]一片闹元宵之喜庆場面,欢声笑語,嬉戏偕趣!
问好![/quote]
文问好白云兄!谢谢雅评!外出几天,迟复为歉!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-23 09:37:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄外出一周,又到那兒风景区旅游寻趣呀!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-24 07:02:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="白云闲人"]笑聊兄外出一周,又到那兒风景区旅游寻趣呀![/quote]
从没出过国门,破天荒第一次出去观光,感慨良多。
谢谢白云兄关怀!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 02:46:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

注:这篇蝶恋花-闹元宵词写于去年元宵节。地点在无锡的南禅寺。“南朝四百八十寺,多少楼台烟雨中。”南禅寺正是四百八十寺之一,多次毁于战火,最后一次重建是清光绪年间。
南禅寺历来是热闹场所。遇到庙会及中秋、元宵诸节,更是热闹非凡。去年元宵节天气真好。入夜后,多彩灯光把南禅寺照的如同白昼。天空不时闪亮着七彩缤纷的火树银花。我去了南禅寺,真个是人山人海,熙熙攘攘。有舞龙灯的;有猜灯谜的;道两旁小商贩吆喝着;不时传来小孩啼哭;大人呼唤着孩子;老婆叫老公; 老太叫老头。要什么声音有什么声音。
可惜今年天公不作美(无锡地区有时有小雨),估计看不到去年的热闹场景了,这也是一大憾事。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 05:43:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

生查子-元宵临屏依韵填写:
上午又天阴,傍晚阳光照。节日气氛浓,猜谜元宵闹。
热闹胜前年,叫卖声时吵。火树闪银花,笑语舒容俏。

注:想不到下午天气转好,到傍晚竟然露出晚霞。现在一轮明月高挂中天,耳中响声不断,天空时不时闪亮着火树银花。
今年元宵似往年,一派平安元宵夜!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 07:32:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

即兴写元宵,情景皆美妙。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 07:48:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢庆宏兄雅评!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-01 06:32:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

说也奇怪,上午还阴沉沉地,到了下午四点多,无锡地区竟然云开日出。到了晚上,天空居然少云天气。玉轮悬于中天,一丝轻云缠绕蟾宫。夜色多美好,心情也爽朗。真是老天厚赐啊!因此得便游玩南禅寺。以致得以写出永遇乐-闹元宵的词来。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-01 08:11:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

赏好诗赋,霞光特来学习!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-02 01:02:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢霞光依依朋友赏读!互相学习.
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PostPosted: 2010-03-03 05:57:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

闹元宵

体现闹的特点

欣赏
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PostPosted: 2010-03-03 06:01:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢影沉寒水点评蝶恋花-闹元宵!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-05 04:52:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="笑聊"]说也奇怪,上午还阴沉沉地,到了下午四点多,无锡地区竟然云开日出。到了晚上,天空居然少云天气。玉轮悬于中天,一丝轻云缠绕蟾宫。夜色多美好,心情也爽朗。真是老天厚赐啊!因此得便游玩南禅寺。以致得以写出永遇乐-闹元宵的词来。[/quote]
永遇乐-闹元宵文化·原创 2010-02-28 21:35:29
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龙戏花灯,谜猜依旧,人湧潮堵。七彩银花,声声震耳,闪亮缤纷吐。

中天皓月,嫦娥练袖,福泽广施频处。看天下、升平欢乐,一派喜庆歌舞。



南禅寺内,重檐勾角,宝塔风铃倾诉。高踩云桥,太平曲调,祈祷丰年驻。

春风哪里,柳新淡绿,烟火是相思树。任繁华、年年岁岁,岂能相误!



注:早上天气预报说阴有时有雨。午后四点多天气转多云,入夜,天空无云 ,皓月中天。不由得联想翩翩、、、

南禅寺热闹依旧,人山人海,天空闪亮,七彩缤纷。龙灯舞、迷灯猜,今日元宵普天庆!
南禅寺位于无锡南门,是南朝四百八十寺之一.多次毁于战火,现在的宝塔是清光绪年间建造的,余多修建.翻新.
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