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qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-02-23 12:27:13 Post subject:

枫叶霜红透，天涯景色幽。诗坛会挚友，信笔荡兰舟。

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-23 21:26:26 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

枫叶霜红透，天涯景色幽。
诗坛会挚友，信笔荡兰舟。

信笔荡兰舟，涂鸦描素裘。
天涯无路远，蒿过有汀洲。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-24 07:37:20 Post subject:

[quote="佟俊儿"][quote="qinghongh"]枫叶霜红透，天涯景色幽。诗坛会挚友，信笔荡兰舟。[/quote]信笔荡兰舟，涂鸦描素裘。 ...[/quote] 蒿过有汀洲，汀州聚白鸥。随意飞翔去，蓝天任自游。

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Posted: 2010-02-24 11:46:50 Post subject:

蓝天任自游，豪气贯春秋。沧海凌云志，江河万里流。

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-25 16:26:25 Post subject:

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蓝天任自游，豪气贯春秋。
沧海凌云志，江河万里流。

江河万里流，一醉解千愁。湖心嫌水浅，微漾过层楼。问候！

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Posted: 2010-02-25 19:27:37 Post subject:

谢谢佟俊儿诗友！多保重！

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Posted: 2010-02-25 20:45:52 Post subject:

行云似水流，品茶自无愁。莫怨苍穹浅，飘然醉玉楼。

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Posted: 2010-02-25 22:16:55 Post subject:

莹雪MM，“品茶”可否改为“饮酒”以便与“醉玉楼”相呼应？

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Posted: 2010-02-25 23:31:29 Post subject:

好醉。临屏加油飘然醉玉楼，酩酊万事休不醒枫林梦，尽在一壶收。

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Posted: 2010-02-26 01:01:03 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

莹雪MM，“品茶”可否改为“饮酒”以便与“醉玉楼”相呼应？

qinghongGG，嘻嘻 Embarassed

客观原因偶是不会“饮酒”地 Razz

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Posted: 2010-02-26 01:08:16 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

好醉。临屏加油
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偶还没用“酒”呢！人家白水兄就已“酩酊、壶收”啦！ Wink

若是用了，不得‘诗句万篇留’呀 Razz

大家加油哦

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Posted: 2010-02-26 06:39:39 Post subject:

尽在一壶收，春秋柳意留。寂寞蟾宫冷，银辉洒神州。

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Posted: 2010-02-26 06:49:11 Post subject:

银辉洒神州，春意闹枝头惊醒堂前燕，呢喃吟春秋

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Posted: 2010-02-26 07:24:16 Post subject:

呢喃吟春秋，紫燕掠枝头。翻飞追逐去，长空任遨游。

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-26 07:54:51 Post subject: :(

qinghongh wrote:

谢谢佟俊儿诗友！多保重！

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-26 07:56:55 Post subject:

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谢谢佟俊儿诗友！多保重！

糟了，误会了

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-26 08:10:15 Post subject:

长空任遨游，E网难收。笑聊春秋紫燕过，白水银辉流。 QINGHONGH 北美枫叶幽，莹雪飘飘行云醉玉楼。俊儿得罪，奉上顺口溜。周末愉快

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Posted: 2010-02-26 08:25:29 Post subject:

有趣。奉上顺口溜，天南地北游。以文会诗友，香茗邀五洲。

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-26 17:06:54 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

有趣。奉上顺口溜，天南地北游。以文会诗友，香茗邀五洲。

香茗邀五洲，锦帽伴雕裘。
夜深人不寐，月影过千秋。

呵呵，差不多该换韵了，要不都重复了

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Posted: 2010-02-26 19:54:23 Post subject:

月影过千秋幽韵心中留丽人阑珊处劝君莫回眸

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