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春声碎—初春

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Posted: 2010-02-24 21:18:36 Post subject: 春声碎—初春

云暗欲飞琼，默默倾忧情绪。风吹发乱，余寒存力，对句心无腻。冬新去，暖凉亦在天，听任迭、春声碎。梅娇水边丽，醉态华容韵起。新篇笔漫，俏影入文新、自留气。歌四季，休叹梦短难长，遣郁闷、书诗意。

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Posted: 2010-02-24 21:36:24 Post subject:

春意盎然,生机勃勃,特喜欢第二阙结句,多积极的生活态度! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-02-25 01:15:09 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

春意盎然,生机勃勃,特喜欢第二阙结句,多积极的生活态度!

新年好，谢谢您细致点评！

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Posted: 2010-02-25 04:49:09 Post subject:

暖凉自在天，听任迭、春声碎来学习 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-02-25 09:15:54 Post subject:

新篇笔漫,梅娇水边丽,醉态华容韵起 ... 妙笔生花春意漫! 问好莹雪! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-02-25 11:21:32 Post subject:

听任迭、春声碎。遣郁闷、书诗意。任迭春声碎，四季书诗意。

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Posted: 2010-02-25 20:35:10 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

暖凉自在天，听任迭、春声碎

来学习

客气

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Posted: 2010-02-25 20:36:52 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

新篇笔漫,梅娇水边丽,醉态华容韵起 ... 妙笔生花春意漫!
问好莹雪!

问好白云！谢谢关注。

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Posted: 2010-02-25 20:38:13 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

听任迭、春声碎。

遣郁闷、书诗意。

任迭春声碎，四季书诗意。

谢谢qinghongGG关注！

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Posted: 2010-02-26 06:47:31 Post subject:

情融春梅：醉态华容韵起。俏影入文新、自留气。问好莹雪！学习来了。

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Posted: 2010-02-26 20:18:13 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

情融春梅：醉态华容韵起。俏影入文新、自留气。
问好莹雪！学习来了。

谢谢笑卿点评！

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Posted: 2010-02-27 02:06:08 Post subject:

来学习佳作，新年快乐 _________________ 倚楼听风雨，淡看人生路

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Posted: 2010-02-27 17:50:53 Post subject:

樊德林 wrote:

来学习佳作，新年快乐

您客气，新年快乐

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