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偶遇(之三)偶遇(之四)
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PostPosted: 2010-02-15 20:34:08    Post subject: 偶遇(之三)偶遇(之四) Reply with quote

偶遇(之三)
这怎么会是无意,
车厢中两人站得那么近。
眼里闪着内心的微妙,
怎不知彼此的感觉。

总是等后悔从心里追出,
才敢回答你背影留下的话语。
难道这只是面子作怪?
把我们各隔一处。



偶遇(之四)
记得擦肩而过的相视,
回味青春甜美的背影。
真的,一次一次的胆怯,
错过那么多可能发生的故事。

现在,在我一人的地方,
我可以不理会自己的懊恼。
不去想有你在一起的缠绵,
始终丢不开你那回眸一笑。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-15 21:01:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

连发的三组都看了。一言以蔽之:真!

一见钟情!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-16 21:35:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

回韩少君
谢谢你的点评,问好,祝你新年快乐。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-17 20:42:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

回眸一笑百媚生,难怪韩少君老师一见就钟情,呵呵~~

问好两位老师~
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PostPosted: 2010-02-19 08:20:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

回冷巉
谢谢,彼此诗友,问好新年。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-19 08:53:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

回味悠长~~~

问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-20 00:21:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

回阿依琼裙
谢谢你悠长的感觉,祝你新年快乐。
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