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[投稿] 北海:一颗亮丽的珍珠(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2007-03-18 15:33:42    Post subject: [投稿] 北海:一颗亮丽的珍珠(外一首) Reply with quote

[投稿] 北海:一颗亮丽的珍珠(外一首)

作者:剑熔

大海,百年孕育的一颗亮丽的珍珠
镶在北部湾美丽的海岸线上
夺去,多少人的目光

大海依然舞蹈着。海风依然伴奏着
椰树,这一个头戴竹笠的汉子,挥动着宽大的手臂
海鸥,这一个小小的身体,展翅在海面上逐浪

帆影飘动。笛声由远海随风而至
出海的船只,在日头偏西的
时候,归航了

游人如织。银滩这张珍贵的地毯
双脚踩上去,惊动数万万只小海蟹
它们慌忙地躲进蜂巢似的洞穴

北海,一颗亮丽的珍珠,镶在大海边
谁也拿不走。能拿走的,是你
摄入她美丽的容貌,让你珍藏一辈子

《夜宿北海》
深夜,披着星光从南宁而来
走过北海粗大的食管,住进
城市深处那片跳动的肺叶之上

激动,让我一夜未眠
我仿佛看见了大海
涛声从远处涌来,穿越了城市的身体
向我走来。难以入睡
掀开窗子,看北海的夜色
数天上闪烁的星星
多么希望太阳快快升起
北海如诗如画
走进我的视线




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PostPosted: 2007-03-18 22:03:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

写干净,自然,朴实之中有思考!
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PostPosted: 2007-03-19 07:22:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

稍微有些平。
问好。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-19 08:29:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

支持兄,干净、语言朴实有力!
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