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望海潮

渔樵耕读
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Posted: 2007-03-18 00:39:27 Post subject: 望海潮

十里长沙，潇湘涸涸，多情最是春伤。雨夜缠绵，雷惊贽咽，凋零星月无光。无事莫临江，漫锁迷天雾，思断愁肠。黄杏白梨，看来俱是泪汪汪。花坞几树海棠，自悄然开放，艳也无香。清喉弄影，管萧靡甚，叫人怎不彷徨。更那堪思得，腹内原来事，郁恨弥腔。问这时光何度，仰首叹生长。 20070315 _________________ 要买湖南的存年红茶，黑茶，找我，0731-82308079

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Posted: 2007-03-18 12:14:15 Post subject: Re: 望海潮

渔樵耕读 wrote:

十里长沙，潇湘涸涸，多情最是春伤。

雨夜缠绵，雷惊贽咽，凋零星月无光。

无事莫临江，漫锁迷天雾，思断愁肠。

黄杏白梨，看来俱是泪汪汪。

花坞几树海棠，自悄然开放，艳也无香。

清喉弄影，管萧靡甚，叫人怎不彷徨。

更那堪思得，腹内原来事，郁恨弥腔。

问这时光何度，仰首叹生长。
20070315

春伤、愁肠、泪汪汪......wow，好悲伤啊。
“花坞几树海棠，自悄然开放，艳也无香。清喉弄影，管萧靡甚”很有古人韵味。
欣赏！

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