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和朋友诗句兼题图(五首)
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PostPosted: 2010-01-30 21:44:39    Post subject: 和朋友诗句兼题图(五首) Reply with quote



1 老五诗句《题图·蝶儿轻绿丝上招》(2010-1-30晚)

弦线丝丝柔风摇,蝶儿轻绿丝上招。
疾鸯扑翅翩跹至,如镜浏波鸳梦娆。

2 《题图·和老五“蝶儿轻绿丝上招”》( 2010-1-30晚)

绿羽新胚碧荡摇,隔帘扑翅向天招。
晴波映日和风起,水暖河洲尽秀娆。

3 《题图·又和老五“蝶儿轻绿丝上招”》(2010-1-30晚)

帘轻不要酒旗摇,清波一镜柳衣招。
能闲得胜悠仙境,蝶绿蜂红醉丽娆。


4 《题图·前韵再题春柳》(2010-1-30晚)

柳棉如絮古今摇,占尽春芳万野招。
红紫蝶蜂轻掠过,色苍颜减剩何娆?

5 《题图·春柳》(2010-1-30晚)

为情陶醉亦情忙,错任东风上下狂。
犹蝶梦翻多梦恼,三春忙过又何当。 
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PostPosted: 2010-01-30 22:04:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!疑为指下误——

1 老五诗句《题图·蝶儿轻绿丝上招》(2010-1-30晚)

弦线丝丝柔风摇,
蝶儿轻绿丝上招。——仄平平仄平仄平
疾鸯扑翅翩跹至,如镜浏波鸳梦娆。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-31 11:45:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

啊! 好优美的风景,好抒情的诗篇!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-31 12:04:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

這池塘的圖片真美!不知有沒有高清的版本?
那像是塘鵝吧?怎麽寫成了蝶?
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PostPosted: 2010-01-31 12:13:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
问好!疑为指下误——

1 老五诗句《题图·蝶儿轻绿丝上招》(2010-1-30晚)

弦线丝丝柔风摇,
蝶儿轻绿丝上招。——仄平平仄平仄平
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呵呵,這個明顯算作古風,第一句都三平了。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-01 05:23:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!欣赏学习!写得真美!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-01 06:46:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

戴玨 wrote:
這池塘的圖片真美!不知有沒有高清的版本?
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看那弦丝上,落满了轻绿色的蝴蝶。。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-01 07:02:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

很美的诗配画。。。喜欢。

此图很流行,也曾和友:

弦丝轻舞招千蝶
明镜微皱戏只鸭

后句一时想不起,还是以前写的。 Smile
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PostPosted: 2010-02-02 08:58:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

柔美
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