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童年傳說二則

戀海
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Posted: 2010-01-26 23:12:29 Post subject: 童年傳說二則

一、指月傳說的故事這樣傳說吶以手指指月月悄悄地來來到夢裡夢裡割一截童心還有一些不能說的不能說的關於那些耳語二、玉蘭花她連小學都沒有念完就在街頭叫賣玉蘭花我從未見過玉蘭花開玉蘭花摘下來都是寂寞的容顏像二姑的那張臉卻散發芬芳

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2010-01-27 04:31:02 Post subject:

很欣赏后一首，最好的是前2句，我眼里一下子跳出朝鲜电影卖花姑娘的那个美丽而凄然的形象。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

戀海
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Posted: 2010-02-12 19:58:38 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

很欣赏后一首，最好的是前2句，我眼里一下子跳出朝鲜电影卖花姑娘的那个美丽而凄然的形象。

問好杯中沖浪
謝謝點評

此詩所寫
為四十年前的情況

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