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比如(外三首)
欧开平
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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 09:41:27    Post subject: 比如(外三首) Reply with quote

比如(外三首)
  
  文/ 欧开平
  
  《比如》
  
  这些年,我蜗居于城市
  一边沉浮,向上呼吸
  一边探询,左右侧身
  
  电话两头,我和母亲说着话
  这边一切都好,妈你放心
  按下工资微薄,房价又上涨不说
  说出来,我已置身纷繁与流动
  的夹层,生死不祥
  
  《一对湖南口音夫妻》
  
  或许,是我的口音
  接近他们的方言
  男人,对我十分友好
  女人,向我展示温柔
  
  从南到北,由北转南
  在一个城市和另一个城市间
  回旋,他们像
  一对双飞双宿的鸟,又类比于
  木椅,小铁锤,勾针,鞋油,毛刷
  
  《收银女孩》
  
  去超市给孩子买牛奶
  挑蒙牛,排长队
  我发现收银员是个漂亮的女孩
  我的印象是,她的嘴比葡萄酒更红
  小巧玲珑的手,比白金高贵
  只是她说的话,很杂
  像我一样夹着乡下的母语
  结果是,两个相同音调碰撞一起
  我们之间,产生了短暂的慌乱
  
  《景象》
  
  北风吹乱天空
  从年尾年头中间下起小雪
  即使大雪,女人一样显摆裙子
  妩媚,形成对比的男人
  扣紧棉衣,忧虑丛丛
  我注意到城市与乡村不同
  男女根本的区别,在于
  一个外体是瓷,一个内心如铁
  
  通联:556000贵州省凯里市北京西路31号工商银行
  
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 20:33:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

男女根本的区别,在于
一个外体是瓷,一个内心如铁

新意的发现 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 20:55:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

内心细致~总会于平常中感受到不平常~~
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 01:11:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白水、安安
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 14:13:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

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按下工资微薄,房价又上涨不说
说出来,我已置身纷繁与流动
的夹层,生死不祥

像我一样夹着乡下的母语
结果是,两个相同音调碰撞一起
我们之间,产生了短暂的慌乱
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 02:19:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

broke teeth
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