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Posted: 2007-03-15 21:17:12 Post subject: 春雨

春雨徐业华刚劲虬枝上的暗香已若有似无四蹄生风的马带来了一个婴儿诞生的消息一切都在用最好的角度展示最美好的一面谁的手绢把天空打了一层蜡在一根兰色魔棒的指挥下一切都明亮起来所有的事物都开始膨胀、裂变、打喷嚏绿色烟雾里窗口一扇扇打开隐隐约约中谁的唇边娇艳欲滴洇湿了那首茉莉花的旋律江南在依旧葳蕤序幕被徐徐拉开似乎要上演一部不露声色的话剧只是有的一边在卸妆一边在补妆通讯地址：243100安徽省当涂县文化局 _________________ 只有在寒冷的冬天，我们才能接近最纯净的光芒。

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Posted: 2007-03-16 18:18:23 Post subject:

一边在卸妆一边在补妆意象活泼很好 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-03-16 20:12:16 Post subject:

谢谢斑竹批阅，多指教。 _________________ 只有在寒冷的冬天，我们才能接近最纯净的光芒。

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Posted: 2007-03-16 20:15:26 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

一边在卸妆一边在补妆

意象活泼
很好

问好和平岛及其他各位斑竹，在这里一并有礼了，初来宝地，多多指教。
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Posted: 2007-03-18 16:36:13 Post subject:

请各位斑竹、诗友再批呵。 _________________ 只有在寒冷的冬天，我们才能接近最纯净的光芒。

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Posted: 2007-03-19 17:04:50 Post subject:

拙作已稍作修改，请各位方家多批。 _________________ 只有在寒冷的冬天，我们才能接近最纯净的光芒。

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Posted: 2007-03-19 17:55:32 Post subject:

"葳蕤" 请教,这两个字怎么读?是什么意思啊?\|\|\| _________________ End－宿 http://www.endsu.com SKY的博客 http://blog.sina.com.cn/skyufo

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Posted: 2007-03-19 18:30:11 Post subject:

weirui,见字典。 _________________ 只有在寒冷的冬天，我们才能接近最纯净的光芒。

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Posted: 2007-03-19 18:31:38 Post subject:

skyufo wrote:

"葳蕤"

请教,这两个字怎么读?是什么意思啊?|||

读音：weirui
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