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咏白海棠
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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:30:48    Post subject: 咏白海棠 Reply with quote

半掩湘帘半掩门,(黛玉)
也宜墙角也宜盆。(湘云)
晚风不散愁千点,(宝玉)
冰雪招来露砌魂。(宝钗)

【本帖最后由 李家三郎 于 2009-2-14 00:02 编辑】
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:32:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋容浅淡映重门,(宝玉)
借得梅花一缕魂。(黛玉)
淡极始知花更艳,(宝钗)
多情伴我咏黄昏。(探春)

【本帖最后由 李家三郎 于 2009-2-13 23:51 编辑】
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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:34:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

不语婷婷日又昏,(宝钗)
碾冰为土玉为盆。(黛玉)
芳心一点娇无力,(探春)
宿雨还添泪一痕。(宝玉)

【本帖最后由 李家三郎 于 2009-2-13 23:53 编辑】
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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:35:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

偷来梨蕊三分白,(黛玉)
珍重芳姿昼掩门。(宝钗)
玉是精神难比洁,(探春)
非关倩女亦离魂。(湘云)

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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:37:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

种得蓝田玉一盆,(湘云)
雪为肌骨易销魂。(探春)
胭脂洗出秋阶影,(宝钗)
清砧怨笛送黄昏。(宝玉)

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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:38:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

苔翠盈铺雨后盆,(探春)
捧心西子玉为魂。(宝玉)
娇羞默默同谁诉?(黛玉)
无奈虚廊夜色昏。(湘云)

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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:41:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

七节攒成雪满盆,(宝玉)
愁多焉得玉无痕?(宝钗)
青灯照壁入初睡,(黛玉)
人为悲秋易断魂。(湘云)

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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:43:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

原帖由 李家三郎 于 2009-2-14 00:09 发表
七节攒成雪满盆,(宝玉)
愁多焉得玉无痕?(宝钗)
青灯照壁入初睡,(黛玉)
人为悲秋易断魂。(湘云)

可好?

青灯照壁入初睡——海棠浅睡最是迷人的,嘻

关机后也想到过不用咏白海棠的那六首诗,从其他诗里找。现在看来,不需要了,因为我未必能找到比这句更合适的句子。哈哈,惠州人的确比我会诌。

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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:45:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

奇丽,把红楼梦里的诗句拼成咏海棠的。

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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:46:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

缝诗妙手。/推精华。

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PostPosted: 2010-01-12 20:48:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

唉,俺只能够望牛兴哞!非常嫉妒。

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