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七七来交功课，欠的，清啦哈~ 亲爱的们，新年好嗷——！！！！！

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Posted: 2010-01-03 05:34:59 Post subject: 七七来交功课，欠的，清啦哈~ 亲爱的们，新年好嗷——！！！！！

《白绵羊之教义》我鞭打我的绵羊。我吃着画上的水源和山岗：那丰沛的资源现已捉襟见肘，短缺如漏洞百出的宗教，可笑。旧年的浮云吐出鱼鳔，沉下龙潭。八百里山河进入琥珀，波浪上跑着空空的王陵…… ——我不干，我反对民间巨大的忘性—— 那我反手掷出当头鸿运可以吗？将进酒啊，朋友如弃子咩咩~ 收官在即啊，我们却争着披对方的皮去遛达~ 肯定是醉了。拥抱令人窘迫。既危险又不适。 ——一边打嗝、掏肺腑一边寂寞，心猿意马念故人—— 那么纯洁、迷茫、自恋，象新出生的俩羊我信手涂鸦至日上三杆，又鞭打这俩羊。在波浪上我感到紧张。

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Posted: 2010-01-03 06:08:01 Post subject:

是在这里呀八百里山河进入琥珀，在波浪上我感到紧张 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2010-01-03 12:52:09 Post subject:

昂，真好！谢过和岛

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Posted: 2010-01-03 14:23:51 Post subject:

这诗写的
好！
是进入了一个状态了
在透的边缘
而小外物，而非既往
但又未全身而退
就这个状态。

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肯定是醉了。

拥抱令人窘迫。

既危险又不适。

这三个句号用得好。
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Posted: 2010-01-03 22:11:50 Post subject:

迟交的作业，该罚

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Posted: 2010-01-03 22:15:40 Post subject:

写得象一副画一样~~读着有立体感~~ 前些天看到一只琥珀~~里面果真气壮山河~~很神奇~ 新年好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-01-05 18:16:52 Post subject:

新年好！很空灵的语言。有点宗教。形而上是两只羊 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2010-01-05 22:49:14 Post subject:

七七新年好！ ——后面的很生活很情感！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-01-06 15:37:18 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

写得象一副画一样~~读着有立体感~~
...

画有立体感吗？至少国画没有。
应该说写得象Avatar一样。iMAX里的

照片好像是越狱成功 Very Happy

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遛达的七七
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Posted: 2010-01-07 19:00:15 Post subject:

Nobody，山城子老师，少君，安红红，白水，and博弈，谢过各位雁过留声，令我仰望和欣慰的人我也一直看着你们…… 咳咳，，，那个越狱成功的图片么，想来是可笑，好像摔疼了屁股那样。

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Posted: 2010-01-12 02:21:08 Post subject:

七七的诗歌就像拼贴画，七彩交错，煞是好看，很有孩子的顽皮，看着就想笑。有时让人瞠目，思绪乱跳，不知所踪，不过也好玩。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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