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游九寨沟（旧作二首）

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Posted: 2009-12-30 21:14:18 Post subject: 游九寨沟（旧作二首）

游九寨沟 (其一）九寨景清幽，人来画内游。绿阴消盛夏，碧水浸初秋。泉喜珍珠跃，林深异兽悠。风光藏世外，但愿净心留。（注：九寨沟有珍珠滩，流水腾若珍珠。异兽：大熊猫。）五绝镜海（其二）仙姑遗宝镜，化做镜湖奇。满目春秋色，全为碧海吸。（注：九寨沟的镜海（湖）传说是天上仙女所遗宝镜所化而成，湖水清澈，映照山影。）

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Posted: 2009-12-30 21:17:02 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

游九寨沟 (其一）
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“荫”字出了，改为“阴”似乎也可。问好庆宏老弟！

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Posted: 2009-12-30 21:22:21 Post subject:

风光藏世外，但愿净心留。欣赏

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Posted: 2009-12-30 21:22:50 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

游九寨沟 (其一）
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“荫”字出了，改为“阴”似乎也可。问好庆宏老弟！

谢李兄指正！我习惯用新声韵，作为川人，有时二三声不分，造成出律。《新华字典》里“荫”有1或4声，在古韵里“荫”读4声？

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Posted: 2009-12-30 21:26:54 Post subject:

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qinghongh wrote:

游九寨沟 (其一）
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“荫”字出了，改为“阴”似乎也可。问好庆宏老弟！

查了下2002年版的《现代汉语词典》，荫，阴平，树阴：绿树成荫。——记得按旧读作仄声。

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Posted: 2009-12-30 21:34:02 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

李盈枝 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

游九寨沟 (其一）
...

“荫”字出了，改为“阴”似乎也可。问好庆宏老弟！

谢李兄指正！我习惯用新声韵，作为川人，有时二三声不分，造成出律。《新华字典》里“荫”有1或4声，在古韵里“荫”读4声？

《诗韵新编》出版说明，和《汉语诗律学》导言，都主张用现代语音来写诗词。我习惯了旧读，也只好依唐宋规矩了。另起炉灶，年龄不不允许了。

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Posted: 2009-12-30 22:07:23 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

风光藏世外，但愿净心留。

欣赏

谢白水兄雅赏。

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Posted: 2009-12-30 22:10:32 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

李盈枝 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

游九寨沟 (其一）
...

“荫”字出了，改为“阴”似乎也可。问好庆宏老弟！

谢李兄指正！我习惯用新声韵，作为川人，有时二三声不分，造成出律。《新华字典》里“荫”有1或4声，在古韵里“荫”读4声？

《诗韵新编》出版说明，和《汉语诗律学》导言，都主张用现代语音来写诗词。我习惯了旧读，也只好依唐宋规矩了。另起炉灶，年龄不不允许了。

很高兴与李兄探讨。有的字古韵新韵读法不同，但如果都能了解，大有好处。

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Posted: 2009-12-30 22:20:35 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

李盈枝 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

李盈枝 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

游九寨沟 (其一）
...

“荫”字出了，改为“阴”似乎也可。问好庆宏老弟！

谢李兄指正！我习惯用新声韵，作为川人，有时二三声不分，造成出律。《新华字典》里“荫”有1或4声，在古韵里“荫”读4声？

《诗韵新编》出版说明，和《汉语诗律学》导言，都主张用现代语音来写诗词。我习惯了旧读，也只好依唐宋规矩了。另起炉灶，年龄不不允许了。

很高兴与李兄探讨。有的字古韵新韵读法不同，但如果都能了解，大有好处。

我在红袖论坛发过一个帖子，认为用新韵最大的方便处，是不需要韵书，按普通话读音感觉顺口，就肯定合韵。你看我给您的打油诗，事实上是对旧韵的批判。明明很押韵，古人却把那些韵脚分到了5个不同的韵部里。

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