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《在那阳光照耀的地方》
迪拜
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 23:17:45    Post subject: 《在那阳光照耀的地方》 Reply with quote

《在那阳光照耀的地方》

•迪拜•


有一朵花,它昨夜的眼泪
是你暖心的呵护凝结的疲惫

有一朵花,它星夜辗转
依恋着你宽厚的胸膛才得以渐渐入睡

你坚毅的身躯上大地的宁静
让那泪痕悄悄化作明日别样的晶莹

你啊,当你怦然醒来
天空,已经再次辽阔

在那阳光照耀的地方
更有美丽的花儿将会开放
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 02:54:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

想家啦??那就回来吃盘饺子。。 Crying or Very sad
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我把天空装在我家里,鸟儿天空中飞来飞去
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 02:54:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

想家啦??那就回来吃盘饺子。。 Crying or Very sad
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 05:19:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗!!!!!!!!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 18:25:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢海军!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 20:19:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

昨天冬至~~战士们也想家吧~~
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2009-12-23 20:20:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!

战士让人安宁

战士最可爱!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-25 21:37:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

你啊,当你怦然醒来
天空,已经再次辽阔

——带了情感的简洁灵动的美句!!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 03:26:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

花儿又开啦 Very Happy 回来啦,久不见,问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-29 00:02:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢山城子老师!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-29 00:04:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好nobody!

花儿

越美丽

当然越好。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 02:34:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

修改,如下:

《在那阳光照耀的地方》

·迪拜·



有一朵花,它昨夜的眼泪
是你暖心的呵护凝结的疲惫

它风中辗转,它美丽蒙尘
有了你坚毅的身躯才得以渐渐入睡

依恋着你宽厚的胸膛
夜的泪痕悄悄化作了黎明的骄傲

你啊,当你怦然醒来
天空,已经再次辽阔

在那阳光照耀的地方
更有美丽的花儿将会开放
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