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五绝·青浦泖岛

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Posted: 2009-12-08 03:41:03 Post subject: 五绝·青浦泖岛

五绝·青浦泖岛烟锁池塘柳，灯销泖塔标。远航知返否，僧磬抚平潮。注：烟锁池塘柳——古时一绝对；泖岛——上海青浦区泖岛之泖塔，有花池烟柳留客，有佛塔灯标指航，胜景绝句，今天成了富豪俱乐部，豪华靓丽中似乎少了一点古文化内涵，遗憾。

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Posted: 2009-12-08 04:22:08 Post subject:

烟锁池塘柳，灯销泖塔标。上世纪八十年代，曾在香港大公报见过他人的对句，偏旁不一致，譬如“泉”对“池”。总的来看，都不如原句自然现成。

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Posted: 2009-12-26 19:20:12 Post subject:

五行偏旁意境过得去,遗憾韵母iao多些拗口.

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