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清晨五点漫步秦淮
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 18:26:26    Post subject: 清晨五点漫步秦淮 Reply with quote

秦淮灯影后庭曲,
夫子桨声前代书,
寒柳无言悲落叶,
冬风得意弄玄虚。

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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 18:30:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

啊,我的老友就住在秦淮河附近,在网上认识多年了。他也是退休后居住南京,在国防院校执教三十多年。读此作倍感亲切。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 18:42:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

李兄,我离秦淮河大约二百米,离莫愁更近。散步很方便。得知您有老友在此,甚是高兴。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 19:00:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

君山楚女 wrote:
李兄,我离秦淮河大约二百米,离莫愁更近。散步很方便。得知您有老友在此,甚是高兴。
七律 秦淮秋游杂咏

旧时烟树旧时楼,十里清波千古悠。
桃叶渡闲芳迹杳,媚香阁雅烈魂留。* *
豪闳晋井乌衣巷,画舫吴弦白鹭洲。* *
魂消灯影桨声夜,陶然一醉泮池秋。*

* 桃叶渡:东晋大书法家王献之迎送爱姬桃叶的渡口。
* 媚香阁:秦淮八艳之一的李香君旧居。香君以“血溅诗扇”事而名誉天下。
* 乌衣巷:六朝时叱咤风云的权势人物王导、谢安府宅所在地。
* 白鹭洲:即白鹭洲公园,秦淮画舫可直通公园湖中。
* 泮 池:位于秦淮河畔夫子庙前,是景区最繁华的场所。

【本帖最后由 关山秋 于 2009-11-27 21:35 编辑】

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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 19:06:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

七律 游南京鸡鸣寺

石径盘陀陟寺扃,柏柯苍翠啭黄莺。
禅堂经诵坐僧老,宝殿烟弥香客盈。
熠熠浮屠昭佛义,悠悠梵磬净凡情。
但悲尘世多贪欲,斯设慈航渡众生。

【本帖最后由 关山秋 于 2008-11-25 10:23 编辑】
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 19:09:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

七律 怀旧

未敢抬头已碰头,矮檐底下欲何求?
黄皮裹骨铜声马,臭帽遮颜宁戚牛。
潦倒耻斟咸亨店,穷愁梦上岳阳楼。
等闲燕市枯荣景,慷慨南冠一楚囚。

自评:1、与鄙人过从40余年,可随意进入我的书房,翻阅我的文稿登录我的电脑文档
的挚友,曾对我说过:你的一些忆旧诗词,悲怨的情绪重了些,只有一首写
得像你自己。他所指就是这首两年前的《怀旧》诗。今贴来博师友一笑,是否
有自我卖弄之嫌疑?
2、颈联出句“亨”字出,固有名词,不改。中二联结构略显雷同。

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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 19:12:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

七律.寿三郎兄(普通话)

玉堂锦幛映红灯,华诞佳节双庆迎。
瑞气正随春气满,福星已伴寿星明。
诗章璀璨跻工部,弟子纷纭立雪扃。
万里云山尊岱岳,千杯贺酒颂仙翁。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 19:16:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

发表于 2008-1-30 23:45 资料 个人空间 短消息
玉堂锦幛映红灯,华诞佳节双庆迎。
瑞气正随春气满,福星已伴寿星明。
诗章璀璨跻工部,弟子纷纭立雪扃。
万里云山尊岱岳,千杯贺酒颂仙翁。

次韵兄长关山秋

金陵曾睹帝王灯,往事悠悠数劫迎。
玄武湖边游子戚,泰山脚下夜窗明。
添香红袖逢知己,思友苍颜启玉扃。
惊喜南洋重聚会,关山秋即悯秋翁。

开机前的腹稿记不清了,就先这样吧。

【本帖最后由 李家三郎 于 2008-1-30 23:46 编辑】
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