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冬日两题
荷梦
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PostPosted: 2009-12-19 02:37:21    Post subject: 冬日两题 Reply with quote

《冬天,我不能像草木一样蛰伏》

这场赶走秋的雪,来势太猛
比拼抵抗力的,止仅仅是我
那些来不及睡进泥土的草
那些还没有准备好行程的叶子
那些还在开放的路上行走的菊花
都仓促地蛰伏,寄存着另一季的希望

只是,我不能蛰伏
更不能等来又一季的循环
我得继续做女儿做妻子做母亲
还得努力当好一群孩子的老师
我要证明自己还活着
证明我确曾跨过一些唯一的日子

2009-11-21


《这个冬天,我把日子过成了一道水流》

这个冬天,我的确拥抱过阳光
拥抱过眩目的光,那温暖
足以融化所有的冷
我还跟一些晶亮的绿握过手
它们就在谷桩垂死的脚边微笑
诉说它们的憧憬与迫切

还记得当时,我的心在跳跃在颤动
脚步却一直跟着生活的车轮旋转
那些阳光那些绿,风一样刮过
我没有采集,更无法酿出蜜来收藏

就这样,日子过成了一道水流
顺着生活的沟渠,一直向低处流淌

2009-12-09
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-12-19 20:49:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

这场赶走秋的雪,来势太猛
比拼抵抗力的,止仅仅是我
那些来不及睡进泥土的草
那些还没有准备好行程的叶子
那些还在开放的路上行走的菊花
都仓促地蛰伏,寄存着另一季的希望

两首都有感人的力量~问好荷!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-12-19 23:03:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

我要证明自己还活着
证明我确曾跨过一些唯一的日子

欣赏。最简单的,其实是最难为的,做到这一点,就会拥有欢乐。
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 05:45:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
这场赶走秋的雪,来势太猛
...

谢谢评读!问好!
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 05:47:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
我要证明自己还活着
...

的确如此!
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 05:45:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

清幽而温软的诗
_________________
走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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