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# 春天里的事
仨石子
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PostPosted: 2007-03-14 21:51:00    Post subject: # 春天里的事 Reply with quote

# 春天里的事


春天,被称远驻唐朝
一个阴潮的日子,在夜晚
透明,发声
凌乱的水滴在怀中振振有辞
我想,会不会有鸟叫
惊醒雾中的婴儿
响亮了又一个朝代的开始
这一年,又是谁的君主
花开花落的节奏
谁给安排,谁来打点

风雨都在逃避我的热情
一个漂移的身影
在我手心中模糊,淡化
我始终都是门外汉
跷跷板的天平失重
缺少了半边天的重量
慌乱与笨拙
荒芜了一个沉重的幸福

清风吹一滴雨成泪
幡然醒悟
柳芽在最后的青春中重新生长
芬芳被一些花瓣
谨慎地,细细收藏
一个等字,一个慢字
随季节疯长






我说外地,已经习惯了这种生活
稚气的脸,拐进拐出
在温柔校园里,仍未脱贫
想象一条鱼在水缸中的体验
无法承受咸味与凶险
就这样怕起来
光要穿透身体才能跳跃出来
疼痛与为难
在这时颤颤栗栗

用未知来填空
几张简历表,在众人面前
花容失色
温度在随春天上升
情绪跟着我起急
房子外面摆满尖刀
呼吸声噇噇作声
颤抖,走到眼前
停靠在我眉间的枝头

幸好,没有憧憬
雨水夹着雪砾拍打
躲避不过的春色
会在夜间冻伤一个人
丢掉时间,这件事
与季节无关

路口,起点,奔跑的时刻
起程,要锁起惊恐
等老来享受
圆睁的眼,走进
社会,走近烫伤

用光鲜来形容事业,譬如
我的呼吸,正在往一个城堡泅渡
草根是土色,叶既为绿
水滴突然醒了,凝结
成为一粒汗珠,落地有声
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和平岛
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2007-03-14 22:25:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

春天,被称远驻唐朝

一粒汗珠,落地有声

不错

总体感觉拖得太长
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下一个偶像是野兽
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Joined: 16 Jan 2007
Posts: 504
Location: 西安
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PostPosted: 2007-03-14 23:12:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

一个等字,一个慢字
随季节疯长

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精彩的诗句。
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