Maple Review :: View topic - 我只要你看我一眼

	Chinese Literature Society of North America \| Maple Review \| Immigrants in Canada \| Angel Studio \| The Driftwood Artist Society \| Ocean of Poetry \| Island of Music "HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
	FAQ Search Memberlist Usergroups Register Profile Log in to check your private messages Sign in Blogs Weblogs News Album



Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

我只要你看我一眼

万世长青
童生

Joined: 01 Dec 2009
Posts: 5

万世长青Collection

Posted: 2009-12-01 19:16:35 Post subject: 我只要你看我一眼

我只要你看我一眼我只要你用千万分之一秒的时间看我一眼看我迷恋你的眼底种植的花朵一天比一天灿烂看这花朵我眼中彩色的语言就有蝴蝶扑闪着翅膀那是我双眼的雨翼轻轻环绕在你四周我的花期只要你肯看我一眼这一片灿烂的日子我的日子将是一片美丽的风景和时光我的时光你可以让我等待可以让我不再去看这个世界我只要你看我一眼我就会停止下来我满足的心灵呼吸你我呼吸连着的心跳回应着你你的目光让我看到了活一次的幸福这幸福是你在欣赏我的花朵只要你看我一眼我就可以关闭花朵不再向任何人开放千百万分之一秒的时间我也不同意写于：2005年12月19日改于：2007年4月6日

安红红
同进士出身

Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

安红红Collection

Posted: 2009-12-02 09:39:19 Post subject:

检查一下还得再改改~有错别字~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

万世长青
童生

Joined: 01 Dec 2009
Posts: 5

万世长青Collection

Posted: 2009-12-02 20:52:03 Post subject:

好的！谢了！

Display posts from previous:

Emoticons





View more Emoticons

Page 1 of 1 View previous topic View next topic

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME